
1/9/2020 c3 Poprock2363
it no problem I know writing is not a walk in a park its hard and to be creative write for hours then have to edit half of the freaking story its draining and I thank you for updating I really enjoy your story and please dont hurt your self getting a chapter out take your time OwO UwU
it no problem I know writing is not a walk in a park its hard and to be creative write for hours then have to edit half of the freaking story its draining and I thank you for updating I really enjoy your story and please dont hurt your self getting a chapter out take your time OwO UwU
1/6/2020 c1 Guest
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1/4/2020 c2 Guest
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1/3/2020 c1 Guest
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1/5/2020 c1 Poprock2363
im glad your active and your doing amazing work please update soon again and once again your a great author so dont doubt your writing skills
im glad your active and your doing amazing work please update soon again and once again your a great author so dont doubt your writing skills
1/3/2020 c1 DAfgaahfa aefgsgdsafd
I thought that first version was fine, but I like this one too! I will wait for next chapter!
I thought that first version was fine, but I like this one too! I will wait for next chapter!
10/20/2019 c2 Bla
The story is good, but you need a beta reader. There are quite a lot gramma mistakes. Often forgot the *ed* for something that happened in the past.
Otherwise it is ok.
The story is good, but you need a beta reader. There are quite a lot gramma mistakes. Often forgot the *ed* for something that happened in the past.
Otherwise it is ok.
10/18/2019 c1 Ck
Sequel, thank you for story is a really good one,:)
Sequel, thank you for story is a really good one,:)