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4/28 c2 Josh b
Love this story hope the dispossessed gain some tech so azuyr has it.
11/11/2019 c2 5Narc626
Sheppard as a Lord celestant? interesting. I look forward to more. although lords celestant do not ride gryph chargers ever. Celestants ride either Dracoths or Stardrakes. Lords Arcanum and Lords Aquilor are the ones that get gryph chargers. that being said it's your story, so Sheppard can mount up on what ever the hell you want her to.
11/6/2019 c2 2Gianfranco Cembran
Nice story
11/5/2019 c2 4Firetrail
Better this was a very good chapter, It had a much better flow and feel to it. Keep improving.
10/13/2019 c1 Guest
I hope we meet some characters from Death and Destruction factions races which aren't immediately hostile, like some Undead Skeletons in a Necromantic Coty or some wandering Ogor Mercenary.
10/14/2019 c1 Firetrail
There’s some good ideas here but it need refinement, right off the bat if the Normandy was destroyed then EDI would be dead, her infiltrator body doesn’t have the hardware necessary to fully support her, it’s the reason she couldn’t go far from the Normandy since she was using a wireless connection to control the body and how is she going to recharge her body now that the only stable source of electricity was destroyed, on top of that what are Garrus and Tali going to do? They literally can’t survive in the mortal realms since they can’t get nutrients from the food on any of the realms save for maybe gyran, and that would more be due to the intense life magic in the realm and not the actual nutrients themselves. not to mention Tali needs a super advanced suit just to not get mortally sick from some random Nurgle plague. The Normandy could have helped mitigate some of this issues as they would have a large stock pile of rations for Tali and Garrus. The story could have been about defending the Normandy until it was repaired, defeating a powerful local chaos sorcerer who became interested in them and then the non-natives could have left leaving behind Shepard to her new home. Or you could go the more tragic route and have Shepard die in the final battle and when she is reforged and returned to her chamber she would have no memory of her life before becoming a stormcast devastating her friends before they leave.
10/13/2019 c1 2Gianfranco Cembran
nice story

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