
3/21/2024 c63 Anon
Esdeath the ice queen, hmmmm I wonder if she is a reference to something
Esdeath the ice queen, hmmmm I wonder if she is a reference to something
3/21/2024 c53 M
Oh shiiiiiiiit you did indeed keep my interest up to now.
Now I wonder how Nazarick would react to Narzarick
Oh shiiiiiiiit you did indeed keep my interest up to now.
Now I wonder how Nazarick would react to Narzarick
3/20/2024 c1 M
You have my interest. But the question is can you keep it. (Joke, but genuinely excited by this. )
You have my interest. But the question is can you keep it. (Joke, but genuinely excited by this. )
3/18/2024 c95 Guest
fuck finally dude what take you so long man really i miss you art of story i was waiting but this one is goood as hell
fuck finally dude what take you so long man really i miss you art of story i was waiting but this one is goood as hell
3/16/2024 c86 BoredKing
Making the lesbian a sex slave of the women she's been lusting over for centuries is not a punishment.
Making the lesbian a sex slave of the women she's been lusting over for centuries is not a punishment.
3/14/2024 c14
22Kingdark
15 chapters and I just couldn't take it anymore. Your writing is al over the place. Your tenses are fucked up and its like you didn't even reread your writing.
There are typos NOBODY could miss and yet here they are. maybe you improve in the future but I just can't continue. The idea is good it's the execution that's bad.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story.

15 chapters and I just couldn't take it anymore. Your writing is al over the place. Your tenses are fucked up and its like you didn't even reread your writing.
There are typos NOBODY could miss and yet here they are. maybe you improve in the future but I just can't continue. The idea is good it's the execution that's bad.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story.
3/14/2024 c95 Gnarus
Fuck yeah. Haven't read yet, but.. FUCK YEAH!
Fuck yeah. Haven't read yet, but.. FUCK YEAH!