for Cruel Summer12/19/2019 c6 ABT4Life
I enjoyed this chapter. It shows them wanting a relationship with each other but both still in denial. I liked that you didn’t go into details with the m-rated scene. It didn’t need it.
I think you name the next chapter breakable heaven. Also, can’t wait for arranged marriage. I can be patient for that one because I really like the idea of them in a forced relationship to appease their parents but they wind up falling in love.
I enjoyed this chapter. It shows them wanting a relationship with each other but both still in denial. I liked that you didn’t go into details with the m-rated scene. It didn’t need it.
I think you name the next chapter breakable heaven. Also, can’t wait for arranged marriage. I can be patient for that one because I really like the idea of them in a forced relationship to appease their parents but they wind up falling in love.
12/18/2019 c6 stranger1999
this was so good
Lucy feels something though unlike Natsu shes unaware of it(ofcourse)
i would actually be happy if you didn't do the route of Natsu dating someone else in that AU because that would just be cheating (and i really CANNOT stand cheating like at all) but then again its your story so you have free ground!;)
this was so good
Lucy feels something though unlike Natsu shes unaware of it(ofcourse)
i would actually be happy if you didn't do the route of Natsu dating someone else in that AU because that would just be cheating (and i really CANNOT stand cheating like at all) but then again its your story so you have free ground!;)
11/18/2019 c2 
3SunsetRika
That lunch scene was amazing! His hands, Ahaha but that’s something Id definitely believe
3SunsetRikaThat lunch scene was amazing! His hands, Ahaha but that’s something Id definitely believe
11/18/2019 c3 SunsetRika
No unless is gonna come back to bite me in the future haha. Love how you’re writing both characters in this!
No unless is gonna come back to bite me in the future haha. Love how you’re writing both characters in this!
11/18/2019 c4 SunsetRika
The panty buying got me squealing! Waiting for the chapter that they get caught hehehe
The panty buying got me squealing! Waiting for the chapter that they get caught hehehe
11/18/2019 c5 SunsetRika
Loved this chapter showing their friendship side, great way of developing their relationship! Also any time Cruel Summer comes on on my playlist I now think of this story Plus that ending was too cute
Loved this chapter showing their friendship side, great way of developing their relationship! Also any time Cruel Summer comes on on my playlist I now think of this story Plus that ending was too cute
11/11/2019 c5 16CrazyZaika
Uhh, nice chapter. I love the little start of feelings. And i'm looking forward to the coming chapters.
16CrazyZaikaUhh, nice chapter. I love the little start of feelings. And i'm looking forward to the coming chapters.