
4/7 c44 Mega L0randto
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED this story! It's been nearly two years now since this was added, but I would love to see it continue! My only real gripe is the spelling and grammar errors, but like- I'm an editor at heart, apparently, so I'm used to just self-editing as I read. But still, would love more of this!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED this story! It's been nearly two years now since this was added, but I would love to see it continue! My only real gripe is the spelling and grammar errors, but like- I'm an editor at heart, apparently, so I'm used to just self-editing as I read. But still, would love more of this!
3/20 c44 skyeye015
Great Freaking Story, Absolute LOVED This Story, Hope you doing ight, Man This story is rocking my world
Great Freaking Story, Absolute LOVED This Story, Hope you doing ight, Man This story is rocking my world
12/1/2024 c13 228922
In one of the ds bleach games this was shown, this discussion they’re currently having
In one of the ds bleach games this was shown, this discussion they’re currently having
9/26/2024 c3 Caelumblack13
alright so im probably very late reviewing this and i dont know if theres been improvements moving further on but one point was that there isnt a need to explain every single thing... like what the table is called or to reiterate his perfect japanese. the readers have understood that and constantly addressing it makes it a little weird for the reader even though it make seem like the logical step in the story
alright so im probably very late reviewing this and i dont know if theres been improvements moving further on but one point was that there isnt a need to explain every single thing... like what the table is called or to reiterate his perfect japanese. the readers have understood that and constantly addressing it makes it a little weird for the reader even though it make seem like the logical step in the story
9/13/2024 c44 guardian angel baby brother
please continue when you can I'm looking forward to see what happens next I really want to see more neo it's my favorite character and devil May cry it's my favorite thing of all time bleach is one of my favorite seeing these two crossovers I loved it but I do have one question you do know Neo only die by demon because the power scale between devil May cry and bleach characters is a big difference do you know most of the bleach characters are weaker basically all of them cuz all the devil May cry characters are basically god-like or overpower strong both in the game play and cut scenes and plus an anime series and technically they're immortal they can't die of age so technically you have to be mundus or Sparta table to kill one one of them that's a big difference because I noticed you miss some stuff don't get me wrong I like bleach but there's a big difference between both of bleach and dome May cry devil May cry characters are stronger that's a fact because mundus and Sparta are basically demon gods as a big power scale difference neo neo is basically a nephilim almost and he did beat his dad who's stronger than any character for Pete's sake and he didn't unlock his devil trigger yet well the second form that we see in the fif it's just I know some stuff missing and it's been a while since you continue and I just got more questions I hope you continue story it's great I just know she missed some details I'm a little bit confused at some parts that's why I'm asking some questions
please continue when you can I'm looking forward to see what happens next I really want to see more neo it's my favorite character and devil May cry it's my favorite thing of all time bleach is one of my favorite seeing these two crossovers I loved it but I do have one question you do know Neo only die by demon because the power scale between devil May cry and bleach characters is a big difference do you know most of the bleach characters are weaker basically all of them cuz all the devil May cry characters are basically god-like or overpower strong both in the game play and cut scenes and plus an anime series and technically they're immortal they can't die of age so technically you have to be mundus or Sparta table to kill one one of them that's a big difference because I noticed you miss some stuff don't get me wrong I like bleach but there's a big difference between both of bleach and dome May cry devil May cry characters are stronger that's a fact because mundus and Sparta are basically demon gods as a big power scale difference neo neo is basically a nephilim almost and he did beat his dad who's stronger than any character for Pete's sake and he didn't unlock his devil trigger yet well the second form that we see in the fif it's just I know some stuff missing and it's been a while since you continue and I just got more questions I hope you continue story it's great I just know she missed some details I'm a little bit confused at some parts that's why I'm asking some questions
8/8/2024 c44
1Lobisomen616
This was definitely a treat to read. Nero and the ramifications of demons and devils existing in the Bleach universe definitely made for an interesting read. The Bount Arc was... Well it's kind of hard to work with the Bount Arc of you don't make it your own somehow, but the plot with Arkham definitely made it more interesting, even if it was at the expense of Kariya and the other vanilla Bounts staying bland as Hell, or being even more reductive in the case of some of them like Yoshino. The God of War arc also side-stepped the worst part of the Amagai arc which was Rurichiyo being a spoiled brat and being kept away from the Kasumioji Conspiracy for entirely too damn long, but it also kind of lost the plot with Amagai, namely that he was more fixated on his vendetta against Yamamoto and the Kasumioji Clan for their involvement in his father's death rather than effectively trying to burn the Seireitei in its entirety to the ground like it's the French Revolution. Then again, I actually like Amagai as a short-lived filler antagonist, even if I don't care for the arc as a whole on account of Rurichiyo, Kumoi, Kibune, and the Bakkoto wielders being so boring, although the Bakkoto themselves are interesting and it's fascinating to think of all the different kinds of Zanpakuto that might have been developed over the years before Oetsu came along with his Asauchi. But I digress...
This was a genuinely good read, and it's sold me on the idea of Nero as a main character in a Bleach story, although personally I wouldn't mind seeing him, Dante, Vergil, or even V as a substitute for Zangetsu either. But that's a different fanfic altogether. Nero's Ichigo-esque mistakes with Arkham or the repetition of inner monologues about his and other characters can wear on the nerves a bit, but that same repetition is also very typical for Bleach considering the flow of each episode being at least 5% recap by volume to pad out the run time, so it kind of works if someone was away from the story instead of powering through it all like I did.
All that to say, even if you don't revisit this story, I'd still love to see more from you. The Muse is ever fleeting, but you pretty much nailed your characterization and choreography, even if the story suffered from having to work off two sub-par filler arcs instead of something good like the Zapakuto Rebellion arc, you still made it entertaining and kept the suspense going.

This was definitely a treat to read. Nero and the ramifications of demons and devils existing in the Bleach universe definitely made for an interesting read. The Bount Arc was... Well it's kind of hard to work with the Bount Arc of you don't make it your own somehow, but the plot with Arkham definitely made it more interesting, even if it was at the expense of Kariya and the other vanilla Bounts staying bland as Hell, or being even more reductive in the case of some of them like Yoshino. The God of War arc also side-stepped the worst part of the Amagai arc which was Rurichiyo being a spoiled brat and being kept away from the Kasumioji Conspiracy for entirely too damn long, but it also kind of lost the plot with Amagai, namely that he was more fixated on his vendetta against Yamamoto and the Kasumioji Clan for their involvement in his father's death rather than effectively trying to burn the Seireitei in its entirety to the ground like it's the French Revolution. Then again, I actually like Amagai as a short-lived filler antagonist, even if I don't care for the arc as a whole on account of Rurichiyo, Kumoi, Kibune, and the Bakkoto wielders being so boring, although the Bakkoto themselves are interesting and it's fascinating to think of all the different kinds of Zanpakuto that might have been developed over the years before Oetsu came along with his Asauchi. But I digress...
This was a genuinely good read, and it's sold me on the idea of Nero as a main character in a Bleach story, although personally I wouldn't mind seeing him, Dante, Vergil, or even V as a substitute for Zangetsu either. But that's a different fanfic altogether. Nero's Ichigo-esque mistakes with Arkham or the repetition of inner monologues about his and other characters can wear on the nerves a bit, but that same repetition is also very typical for Bleach considering the flow of each episode being at least 5% recap by volume to pad out the run time, so it kind of works if someone was away from the story instead of powering through it all like I did.
All that to say, even if you don't revisit this story, I'd still love to see more from you. The Muse is ever fleeting, but you pretty much nailed your characterization and choreography, even if the story suffered from having to work off two sub-par filler arcs instead of something good like the Zapakuto Rebellion arc, you still made it entertaining and kept the suspense going.
7/24/2024 c4
3Rose rich 2002
I hope to see this connection soon i reread it after ome time to remember where it left off
Keep up tge good work

I hope to see this connection soon i reread it after ome time to remember where it left off
Keep up tge good work
5/5/2024 c44 Eloy
I Think that you continúe it for me, i am a fan of Devil May Cry and Bleach one of my fanfics favorite i liked how you connected the lore of the two relationship berween Nero and Yoruichi is very well worked,also the friendship that Nero has with ichigo for me it is a very good fic and it would be a shame If you didn’t finísh it seeing how much effort you put into writing it.
I Think that you continúe it for me, i am a fan of Devil May Cry and Bleach one of my fanfics favorite i liked how you connected the lore of the two relationship berween Nero and Yoruichi is very well worked,also the friendship that Nero has with ichigo for me it is a very good fic and it would be a shame If you didn’t finísh it seeing how much effort you put into writing it.
3/8/2024 c44 Anonymous
Maybe there should be three different types of demon/mortal hybrids pure, spiritual, and physical. Yoruichi falls into the spiritual category, a hybrid whose spiritual essence is the only part that's part demonic, they can use the magical powers of a demon, and can heal faster, but their bodies are still mortal, so they can't survive wounds that would normally be fatal to any other mortal, nor do they have the enhanced physical abilities of demons. Physical hybrids, possibly the ones who have been keeping the dragon population down, are hybrids whose bodies are part demonic, probably through taking the risk of actually eating the flesh of a demon and managing to survive. They are basically the exact opposite of Yoruichi, they have all the physical abilities of demons, such as regeneration even from normally fatal wounds, enhanced strength, speed, durability, reflexes, and longevity, but they don't have the magical powers of a demon. Pure hybrids are what Nero is, naturally born a hybrid, so both his body and spiritual essence are part demon. All three have devil trigger, but physical and spiritual hybrids devil triggers are incomplete, not as powerful as a pure hybrids whose devil trigger can evolve further with maturity.
Maybe there should be three different types of demon/mortal hybrids pure, spiritual, and physical. Yoruichi falls into the spiritual category, a hybrid whose spiritual essence is the only part that's part demonic, they can use the magical powers of a demon, and can heal faster, but their bodies are still mortal, so they can't survive wounds that would normally be fatal to any other mortal, nor do they have the enhanced physical abilities of demons. Physical hybrids, possibly the ones who have been keeping the dragon population down, are hybrids whose bodies are part demonic, probably through taking the risk of actually eating the flesh of a demon and managing to survive. They are basically the exact opposite of Yoruichi, they have all the physical abilities of demons, such as regeneration even from normally fatal wounds, enhanced strength, speed, durability, reflexes, and longevity, but they don't have the magical powers of a demon. Pure hybrids are what Nero is, naturally born a hybrid, so both his body and spiritual essence are part demon. All three have devil trigger, but physical and spiritual hybrids devil triggers are incomplete, not as powerful as a pure hybrids whose devil trigger can evolve further with maturity.
11/11/2023 c25 Greer123
I am really enjoying this story and I hope you continue it. Hope you are doing well.
I am really enjoying this story and I hope you continue it. Hope you are doing well.