
5/15 c97
1Chaotiquill
I love that you made agents of chaos Jessie, James and Meowth into *actual* Agents of Chaos. Amazing. Also gives them a good excuse to follow Ash around despite growing as people after their time at Team Rocket.
Can't wait to see the shenanigans everyone will get up to next!

I love that you made agents of chaos Jessie, James and Meowth into *actual* Agents of Chaos. Amazing. Also gives them a good excuse to follow Ash around despite growing as people after their time at Team Rocket.
Can't wait to see the shenanigans everyone will get up to next!
5/14 c1 Nyra Callen
Hi, I'm Nyra Callen!
I just finished reading your story, and I’m genuinely blown away. Your storytelling is so vivid and immersive—it felt like I was living every moment alongside your characters. The depth, the emotion, the twists... everything was masterfully done. You have a rare talent, and I truly believe your work deserves to be seen and celebrated widely. I’d love to share a more detailed review if you're open to it. Please keep writing—your gift is something truly special!
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Hi, I'm Nyra Callen!
I just finished reading your story, and I’m genuinely blown away. Your storytelling is so vivid and immersive—it felt like I was living every moment alongside your characters. The depth, the emotion, the twists... everything was masterfully done. You have a rare talent, and I truly believe your work deserves to be seen and celebrated widely. I’d love to share a more detailed review if you're open to it. Please keep writing—your gift is something truly special!
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4/8 c96 Anime-Master1000
Amazing story, I love how you handled the movie it makes perfect sense XD. Can't wait for the 14th of May
Amazing story, I love how you handled the movie it makes perfect sense XD. Can't wait for the 14th of May
4/4 c96 SnakeGear
That's hilarious. I never expected you to simple skip the events of the first movie, but it makes sense, in a way, since in every story that I have read that makes it to the movie, they make it so Ash remembers (unless I am forgetting one), so "wasting" so much writing to not have a impact in the story, at least immediately, makes sense, and it's so funny jajajaja.
Now, is it a good desicion? Time and future writing will tell, but I am looking forward to it.
Good chapter.
That's hilarious. I never expected you to simple skip the events of the first movie, but it makes sense, in a way, since in every story that I have read that makes it to the movie, they make it so Ash remembers (unless I am forgetting one), so "wasting" so much writing to not have a impact in the story, at least immediately, makes sense, and it's so funny jajajaja.
Now, is it a good desicion? Time and future writing will tell, but I am looking forward to it.
Good chapter.
4/2 c96 MetalBatt
In hindsight, "skipping" the events of the movie makes sense with how you portray your story. The experiences that Ash and co. go through changes their perspectives on the way they should move forward, especially Ash. Having Mewtwo wipe that out completely after 50k words would've honestly made the arc feel like a waste of time. So, good decision overall.
In hindsight, "skipping" the events of the movie makes sense with how you portray your story. The experiences that Ash and co. go through changes their perspectives on the way they should move forward, especially Ash. Having Mewtwo wipe that out completely after 50k words would've honestly made the arc feel like a waste of time. So, good decision overall.