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11/5/2022 c9 Guest
“Don't worry I'm not discontinuing the story”
Lol fucking live it when they say that
12/12/2021 c3 3Waaghmaster13
Hesitation is defeat
7/24/2021 c9 Guest
So great concept but you need to have someone proof read you work also having him to op just makes it boring like really almost 1000 miles for a ball throw like that just takes the fun out it cause the heros are suppost to have struggles thats what makes it interesting
7/21/2021 c3 hanzohasashifan29
Man, sure hope Marcus can visit him sometimes. he's a great father figure, not as great as some people but still great.
7/21/2021 c2 hanzohasashifan29
have to bring up the Dom accident huh?
9/9/2020 c9 lovedalton
Cool story, but you need to get someone to proofread it for you.
7/13/2020 c7 daniel12321
Great but you can put in a lot more detail its ment for better story telling and to put out a lot more chapters before you have the end.
2/1/2020 c9 Atryx10
Grammar was pretty meh, what with wrong usage of words like 'to' and 'your'.
Story so far was pretty interesting. Will await the rewrite.
Hope he gets Toga as partner, as she would complement his everything quite nicely.
2/1/2020 c2 Atryx10
8 foot tall wolf
Since wolf height isn't measured with them standing on their hindlegs, my question becomes:
Can he turn into a fucking green Sif!?
2/1/2020 c1 Atryx10
I'm pretty sure his clothes wouldn't look like he had lived in this new dimension, so he could've mentioned a portal.
1/26/2020 c9 Raven Marcus
12/14/2019 c7 Rebmul
wonder whats gonna happen when his mom sees him for the first time im gonna guess she recognizes him
12/8/2019 c7 10jocoleman2017
11/27/2019 c7 Sunwolf27
I be wondering will izuku have his own jack robot form gears of war and for love intrest how about tsuyu or mina or both.
11/26/2019 c1 Masterx01
My goodness... That was very painful to read. Literal Eye-Bleeding Grammar and more than idiotic plot device to send Izuku to somewhere else.

Basically two cardboard cutout of All Might and some ramdon faceless OC whose 'clash' blew open the fabric of reality like in a cheap Xianxia story and send an ludicrous unlucky Izuku that just 'happened' to be there, not dead, to be send away after a hole in the space was open.

No of introduction to any setting, diferent people speaking in the same paragraph, bad... grammar, among others things...

This was a terrible chapter/intro.
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