
12/7/2020 c1 Guest
But... but ... harry and luna sex! You promised!
But... but ... harry and luna sex! You promised!
6/10/2020 c1 Guest
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5/2/2020 c1 Guest
They should have done it at the beginning of the year, or would be interesting to see what would happen if he impregnated her in summer before Hogwarts
They should have done it at the beginning of the year, or would be interesting to see what would happen if he impregnated her in summer before Hogwarts
3/1/2020 c1 Just the Facts 007
Fun little story. Any chance of listing which titles for the stories referenced?
Fun little story. Any chance of listing which titles for the stories referenced?
12/31/2019 c1 whytry7
I almost never review anymore but this is genuinely one of the greatest fics I’ve ever read and it’s spot on for what a good crack fic should be, also luna’s dreams made me realize I read wayyyy too much fic considering I knew all of them lol. But this was excellent and I really wish the Groundhog Day trope was used more often in HP fic, I’ve read a few short but excellent Code Geass fics that use it but most time travel fics in HP are so standard they either take themselves seriously or try to copy Oh God Not Again which I argue is the gold standard for semi serious humor fics, anyway thank you for this amazing piece of art. And the small mention of Harry becoming an auror and submitting to the MAN was excellent and a point very few fans pick up on as kinda fucked, I mean really he just becomes a cop and in the immortal words or NWA (and many others) FUCk the police
I almost never review anymore but this is genuinely one of the greatest fics I’ve ever read and it’s spot on for what a good crack fic should be, also luna’s dreams made me realize I read wayyyy too much fic considering I knew all of them lol. But this was excellent and I really wish the Groundhog Day trope was used more often in HP fic, I’ve read a few short but excellent Code Geass fics that use it but most time travel fics in HP are so standard they either take themselves seriously or try to copy Oh God Not Again which I argue is the gold standard for semi serious humor fics, anyway thank you for this amazing piece of art. And the small mention of Harry becoming an auror and submitting to the MAN was excellent and a point very few fans pick up on as kinda fucked, I mean really he just becomes a cop and in the immortal words or NWA (and many others) FUCk the police
11/22/2019 c1 elixirmaster
red this on a different site, thanks,it was everything I hoped for, really fun/exciting!
red this on a different site, thanks,it was everything I hoped for, really fun/exciting!
11/19/2019 c1 SomeGuyFawkes
More enjoyable snippets. If you are going to reference other HP works, you should include:
A) "The Lie I've Lived" by jbern - where Harry is his own father (and badass).
B) "Amalgum – Lockhart's Folly" by tkepner - where there are 2 Harry's: regular and a time-traveling mix of Harry and Lockart. So Luna could still have a Harry harem even if "regular" Harry was tied to a girl who wouldn't share.
More enjoyable snippets. If you are going to reference other HP works, you should include:
A) "The Lie I've Lived" by jbern - where Harry is his own father (and badass).
B) "Amalgum – Lockhart's Folly" by tkepner - where there are 2 Harry's: regular and a time-traveling mix of Harry and Lockart. So Luna could still have a Harry harem even if "regular" Harry was tied to a girl who wouldn't share.