for A Rabbit among Wolves9/6/2022 c69 woodxvii
Excellent story. Well done. And now all I can think of is the implications of a smallish island with a bunch of people with superior senses constantly over hearing each other, seeing things they shouldn't, etc. Gossip must be a bitch on menagerie lol
Excellent story. Well done. And now all I can think of is the implications of a smallish island with a bunch of people with superior senses constantly over hearing each other, seeing things they shouldn't, etc. Gossip must be a bitch on menagerie lol
9/6/2022 c69 
1yeaaaahhhh I read
Who is the one yelping. Jaune or Sienna place your bets folks. As I've had a woman ride me hard enough for me to go beyond grunts before and this Sienna gives me the same vibes as her. My bets are on Jaune. Dosen't make him any less of a man. Just makes Sienna hotter.
1yeaaaahhhh I readWho is the one yelping. Jaune or Sienna place your bets folks. As I've had a woman ride me hard enough for me to go beyond grunts before and this Sienna gives me the same vibes as her. My bets are on Jaune. Dosen't make him any less of a man. Just makes Sienna hotter.
9/6/2022 c69 Exterminator156
I love the fact you ended the story the way you did on the funny sex number
I love the fact you ended the story the way you did on the funny sex number
9/6/2022 c69 8jupitermonkey4
Wait, no Adam explanation or reveal? Really? (Loved the story, especially the riot parts)
Feels like a big wasted opportunity
8jupitermonkey4Wait, no Adam explanation or reveal? Really? (Loved the story, especially the riot parts)
Feels like a big wasted opportunity
9/6/2022 c69 artfully
I was sceptical about this story at first, did not think a wight fang story would be good. but it was great and fun. awesome job dude
I was sceptical about this story at first, did not think a wight fang story would be good. but it was great and fun. awesome job dude
9/6/2022 c69 Zero-Zoldyck
I totally understand not fully showing the rest of the movement, but there should at least be an epilogue imo. Not to whine or anything. I really enjoyed the story.
I totally understand not fully showing the rest of the movement, but there should at least be an epilogue imo. Not to whine or anything. I really enjoyed the story.
9/6/2022 c69 6redandready45
At last, we got what we were waiting for: Jaune finally having to put White Fang idiots in their place and Jaune and Sienna finally getting...it over with.
I think if you wanted to do an open ending where nothing is guaranteed, I felt you should've ended it with Jaune and his friends hanging out, with the message being that life may be hard, but we can still find people who make it less hard.
I'm glad you managed to finish the story and I can't wait for your next one.
6redandready45At last, we got what we were waiting for: Jaune finally having to put White Fang idiots in their place and Jaune and Sienna finally getting...it over with.
I think if you wanted to do an open ending where nothing is guaranteed, I felt you should've ended it with Jaune and his friends hanging out, with the message being that life may be hard, but we can still find people who make it less hard.
I'm glad you managed to finish the story and I can't wait for your next one.