for The Legend of Sleepy Mantle11/13/2019 c1 hypernova2718
Thank you for the chapter; the setting is certainly new. Will you explain who Winter's mother is? I cannot picture her being Cinder's daughter.
The past perfect is needed in the first line of the fourth paragraph.
Keep writing.
Thank you for the chapter; the setting is certainly new. Will you explain who Winter's mother is? I cannot picture her being Cinder's daughter.
The past perfect is needed in the first line of the fourth paragraph.
Keep writing.
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