for Brightest Doom1/1 c1 Volunteer Insomniac
this isnt even dr doom, just some guy with tge same last names.
throughout tge beginning of the chapter my suspension of disbelief was straining, but as soon as you made him fall into a hole, it was shattered.
vincent is written like a typical mary sue type fanfic character and is nothing like a real person.
this isnt even dr doom, just some guy with tge same last names.
throughout tge beginning of the chapter my suspension of disbelief was straining, but as soon as you made him fall into a hole, it was shattered.
vincent is written like a typical mary sue type fanfic character and is nothing like a real person.
11/22/2024 c31 N2
Please continue.
Please continue.
9/24/2024 c4 flys36
I just read the A/N for this chapter, and this is the problem I have with this story.
He is not Victor Von Doom Marvel supervillian. He is Vincent Doom, a normal cillage student. He is not Royalty or a villian, there is no reason he should be talking like this!
I just read the A/N for this chapter, and this is the problem I have with this story.
He is not Victor Von Doom Marvel supervillian. He is Vincent Doom, a normal cillage student. He is not Royalty or a villian, there is no reason he should be talking like this!
9/13/2024 c31 Gt
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9/3/2024 c2 
2SinfulScribbles
Why is an OC who just shares the same last as doom acting as if he actually is, like not intentionally doing so but even slipping up and revealing things that arent true about him but are true about Dr. Doom. That and the whole “getting documentation from a country thay doesnt exist.” thing makes it hard to suspend disbelief. T
2SinfulScribblesWhy is an OC who just shares the same last as doom acting as if he actually is, like not intentionally doing so but even slipping up and revealing things that arent true about him but are true about Dr. Doom. That and the whole “getting documentation from a country thay doesnt exist.” thing makes it hard to suspend disbelief. T
8/4/2024 c31 Guest
I'm getting confused with the style of writing that you do it feels like your language is not english. The story is wonderful I'll say that the story is wonderful may be slowing it down and adding more Scenes to build up the pace It goes right now it's a little too fast maybe slow it down just a tiny bit event have more scenes in betweand make longer chapter's size is fine I'm just saying what comes to mind But the main reason I'm writing this is because you because I'm getting confused on which character is talking at which time you're doing good at it but like focus on the person's POV And not focus on other people's POV unless the main character doom is in that situation and can hear the thoughts of those people
I'm getting confused with the style of writing that you do it feels like your language is not english. The story is wonderful I'll say that the story is wonderful may be slowing it down and adding more Scenes to build up the pace It goes right now it's a little too fast maybe slow it down just a tiny bit event have more scenes in betweand make longer chapter's size is fine I'm just saying what comes to mind But the main reason I'm writing this is because you because I'm getting confused on which character is talking at which time you're doing good at it but like focus on the person's POV And not focus on other people's POV unless the main character doom is in that situation and can hear the thoughts of those people
7/31/2024 c2 Guest
I this is supposed to be doom or a person roleplaying doom? Hopefully the character development comes and he stops playing at doom. Also, any interaction with girls is automatically cribge content for now
I this is supposed to be doom or a person roleplaying doom? Hopefully the character development comes and he stops playing at doom. Also, any interaction with girls is automatically cribge content for now
7/9/2024 c2 Blue-Happens
are... are you an incel? this has to be parody right. This is so comically in the danger zone idk what to say.
this version of Doom, in how he talks, what he does, and how people respond to him makes him come off as an incel's dream.
imma keep reading cause it makes me smile from how absolutely cringe this guy is
are... are you an incel? this has to be parody right. This is so comically in the danger zone idk what to say.
this version of Doom, in how he talks, what he does, and how people respond to him makes him come off as an incel's dream.
imma keep reading cause it makes me smile from how absolutely cringe this guy is
6/3/2024 c4 coduss
so like...what was the point of making the antitoxin stuff specifically to work on the joker and then not use it?
so like...what was the point of making the antitoxin stuff specifically to work on the joker and then not use it?
5/24/2024 c3 mst3ktoo
excuse me Bruce, preemptively take him down? this from the guy who's nemesis kills people as a way of saying hello? going to take him down preemptively? The sheer fucking hypocrisy is just gross
excuse me Bruce, preemptively take him down? this from the guy who's nemesis kills people as a way of saying hello? going to take him down preemptively? The sheer fucking hypocrisy is just gross
5/20/2024 c10 Oof
Honestly a bit evil even by dooms standards man hope this doesn't turn into one gigantic harem fic the more I read
Honestly a bit evil even by dooms standards man hope this doesn't turn into one gigantic harem fic the more I read
5/8/2024 c13 VamPyr00
Eh...why's he adopting Bruce's kid? I get stealing Talia, since she's hot, but going all 'Dad' with Damien is just weird. Not even mentioning the random kid he adopted for no reason at all.
Are Selina and Talia officially part of the harem or no? He doesn't really seem that close with them, despite that amazing video they made.
Eh...why's he adopting Bruce's kid? I get stealing Talia, since she's hot, but going all 'Dad' with Damien is just weird. Not even mentioning the random kid he adopted for no reason at all.
Are Selina and Talia officially part of the harem or no? He doesn't really seem that close with them, despite that amazing video they made.