for Brightest Doom3/4/2024 c2 
1Verdauga
I want to read this, it looks interesting, but gods that Ego is Painful. Especially saying 'this Prince' three times in two sentences. And then there'sI don't think he meant to let that slip.' He said it. Three. Times.
1VerdaugaI want to read this, it looks interesting, but gods that Ego is Painful. Especially saying 'this Prince' three times in two sentences. And then there'sI don't think he meant to let that slip.' He said it. Three. Times.
3/4/2024 c31 Mayhem296
Hey, it's great to see an update!
Thanks for the chapter
Still great and am looking forward to the next one.
Mayhem
Hey, it's great to see an update!
Thanks for the chapter
Still great and am looking forward to the next one.
Mayhem
3/3/2024 c31 3Darkstar the Grimm
No worries, dear author! This was a good chapter as always. I look forward to more as well as of the other stories of yours that I favorited. :)
3Darkstar the GrimmNo worries, dear author! This was a good chapter as always. I look forward to more as well as of the other stories of yours that I favorited. :)
3/3/2024 c31 ProminentDawn
One thing I have to say is that it is severely out of character of both Doom and SI to swear. It sounds like you pretty much have a hate boner for Batman and you want to vent. Don't let that colour up and distort the character that you have made though. It really breaks immersion and even makes it cringeworthy when you picture the noble and aristocratic way Doom talks turn into cusswords.
One thing I have to say is that it is severely out of character of both Doom and SI to swear. It sounds like you pretty much have a hate boner for Batman and you want to vent. Don't let that colour up and distort the character that you have made though. It really breaks immersion and even makes it cringeworthy when you picture the noble and aristocratic way Doom talks turn into cusswords.
1/29/2024 c30 primalparadox
Well that's an impressively elaborate way to get a Judge and likely his family brutally murdered...
Well that's an impressively elaborate way to get a Judge and likely his family brutally murdered...