for Brightest Doom1/14/2024 c10 Darkest-of-Knight
I’ve been enjoying the story so far, but there’s just one thing that bothers me. I didn’t like how you had your character basically mind-rape Talia in the last chapter. And then in this chapter you had her “servicing” Doom. Now I just see her as a full-blown rape victim who was fed the date-rape drug. While I expected your character to not be a hero, I didn’t expect him to be a villain either. That whole thing was very dark and disturbing.
I’ve been enjoying the story so far, but there’s just one thing that bothers me. I didn’t like how you had your character basically mind-rape Talia in the last chapter. And then in this chapter you had her “servicing” Doom. Now I just see her as a full-blown rape victim who was fed the date-rape drug. While I expected your character to not be a hero, I didn’t expect him to be a villain either. That whole thing was very dark and disturbing.
12/29/2023 c2 No just no
Brother, 'This prince'?! Seriously?! Are you fcking kidding me?! Can this story get anymore cringe. First of all this is not a fcking self insert if you base your mc on victor word for word except for the fact that Victor is titanically less cringy and corny. Second of all, Fck off.
Brother, 'This prince'?! Seriously?! Are you fcking kidding me?! Can this story get anymore cringe. First of all this is not a fcking self insert if you base your mc on victor word for word except for the fact that Victor is titanically less cringy and corny. Second of all, Fck off.
11/14/2023 c25 Lip
This chapter was fucking garbage
This chapter was fucking garbage
11/14/2023 c30 Guest
CHATER 26 is the absolute worst
CHATER 26 is the absolute worst
11/14/2023 c25 Guest
This chapter was stupid or rather retarded and made no sense, doom got injured that badly by Bane of all people when even Powergirl (who is a lot more stronger) couldn’t even damage Doom? Fucking stupid bullshit
This chapter was stupid or rather retarded and made no sense, doom got injured that badly by Bane of all people when even Powergirl (who is a lot more stronger) couldn’t even damage Doom? Fucking stupid bullshit
9/5/2023 c2 primalparadox
Love the novel but one thing both brings the quality down and would majorly improve the novel overall. The "Doom Speach" it makes your character appear to have a severe case of 8th grader syndrome, on the other hand if it was involuntarily it'd be hilarious, maybe make it a side effect of his transmigration and have a few people poke fun at him for it occasionally and have him grumble about it in his head.
Love the novel but one thing both brings the quality down and would majorly improve the novel overall. The "Doom Speach" it makes your character appear to have a severe case of 8th grader syndrome, on the other hand if it was involuntarily it'd be hilarious, maybe make it a side effect of his transmigration and have a few people poke fun at him for it occasionally and have him grumble about it in his head.
6/13/2023 c2 the raging chicken
I get it probably had a reason but this guy just referred to himself as "this prince" three times... like it doesn't make him sound sophisticated it makes him sound like a fith grader with a God complex, I'm enjoying the story but stuff like that really sounds stupid from a character who's literally a genius
I get it probably had a reason but this guy just referred to himself as "this prince" three times... like it doesn't make him sound sophisticated it makes him sound like a fith grader with a God complex, I'm enjoying the story but stuff like that really sounds stupid from a character who's literally a genius
6/2/2023 c30 Guest
Hey Big Tofu can you post discord again its says it expired
Hey Big Tofu can you post discord again its says it expired
5/31/2023 c30 Abbadon44
This story is great! I look forward to seeing more of your work. You could stand to include more reactions by the heroes and villains to Doom's changes to the world. I look forward to more actual fight scenes when he gets his plans set up.
This story is great! I look forward to seeing more of your work. You could stand to include more reactions by the heroes and villains to Doom's changes to the world. I look forward to more actual fight scenes when he gets his plans set up.
5/29/2023 c19 TheShami
I tried really hard to stick with this story, but all it is is smut and an ego wank
I tried really hard to stick with this story, but all it is is smut and an ego wank
5/25/2023 c30 jimmy.oz
Pretty good story so far even if i disagree with the brainwashing completely. keep up the good work. i wont lie though i do like what he is doing to batman lol. I do wonder though how he will act when he hears damian is his son but calling someone else father.
Pretty good story so far even if i disagree with the brainwashing completely. keep up the good work. i wont lie though i do like what he is doing to batman lol. I do wonder though how he will act when he hears damian is his son but calling someone else father.
5/25/2023 c29 jimmy.oz
Still wish he wouldn't be brainwashing people but can't expect doom to do anything else.
Still wish he wouldn't be brainwashing people but can't expect doom to do anything else.
5/25/2023 c24 jimmy.oz
I never really thought of it that way when it came to batman but i honestly don't really remember him ever actually doing anything for the city as bruce other than beating people up.
I never really thought of it that way when it came to batman but i honestly don't really remember him ever actually doing anything for the city as bruce other than beating people up.