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11/12/2019 c2 Magi Mari
Cheetah and Poison Ivy hhhmmmm me likey. Also I still can't help but cringe in that Doom speak.
Cheetah and Poison Ivy hhhmmmm me likey. Also I still can't help but cringe in that Doom speak.
11/7/2019 c1 Magi Mari
Rule the world? Couldn't you just make him an anti hero? Everyone knows anti heroes are the coolest. And isn't the point of superhero comics is that there will always be a superheroes that'll rise up to stop the supervillain no matter how many capes fall?
Rule the world? Couldn't you just make him an anti hero? Everyone knows anti heroes are the coolest. And isn't the point of superhero comics is that there will always be a superheroes that'll rise up to stop the supervillain no matter how many capes fall?
11/5/2019 c1 NazgulBelserion
I dig it I laughed cause I thought he became doom younger at first I was like is doom black cause I had no clue lol I fkin googled it hahahhaha
I dig it I laughed cause I thought he became doom younger at first I was like is doom black cause I had no clue lol I fkin googled it hahahhaha
11/4/2019 c1 Ezeakel
nice beginning despite to some degree being quiet fast.
also i can see that his opsession with doom is quiet unhealthy, but i hope that you'll deal with by developng his charatrer probebly.
nice beginning despite to some degree being quiet fast.
also i can see that his opsession with doom is quiet unhealthy, but i hope that you'll deal with by developng his charatrer probebly.
11/3/2019 c1 Joy is overrated
You stated he didnt need to use hand motions, but kept it to confuse enemies. then you later said he has to practice so he doesn't need hand motions...which one is it?
so if this character is you, does that mean you have no personality of your own? Its funny how in trying to be doom, you're doing everything doom wouldn't do, I find the irony of it hilarious. If thats what u were going for and the mc has an epiphany on how dum he is being, I'm cool with that. If this is your actual ability, no disrespect intended, than I'll definitely check out some of your other works. this one comes off a little like a throwaway project.
You stated he didnt need to use hand motions, but kept it to confuse enemies. then you later said he has to practice so he doesn't need hand motions...which one is it?
so if this character is you, does that mean you have no personality of your own? Its funny how in trying to be doom, you're doing everything doom wouldn't do, I find the irony of it hilarious. If thats what u were going for and the mc has an epiphany on how dum he is being, I'm cool with that. If this is your actual ability, no disrespect intended, than I'll definitely check out some of your other works. this one comes off a little like a throwaway project.
11/3/2019 c1 Joy is overrated
wow, another story about a selfish asshole, what will you think of next. I see why you didnt use Doom, because he actually has standards. no flame, just an honest observation. It's written very well, but a bit boring. I've read this sh*t a hundred different times by now, and you're hitting every cliche so far. good luck with the story, its worth atleast a couple thousand favs/follows.
wow, another story about a selfish asshole, what will you think of next. I see why you didnt use Doom, because he actually has standards. no flame, just an honest observation. It's written very well, but a bit boring. I've read this sh*t a hundred different times by now, and you're hitting every cliche so far. good luck with the story, its worth atleast a couple thousand favs/follows.
11/2/2019 c1 
4OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
Oh Dear! Is the DC Verse ready for an alternate Doctor Doom powered via the Sage Force? I think not. I applaud Vincent for not mixing up in hero drama. Question is though, will he succeed to rule DC Earth indefinitely till his dying breath? Will he do the OG Doctor Doom justice? We shall see. The superheroes will never know the threat that is growing, rising and coming their way. Cause by the time they do, it will be too late. Supervillains on the other hand, will experience a new type of fear never before realized when they get acquainted to the name Dr. Doom. Will Vincent learn magic to the same degree as Victor Von Doom, so he can rival or even surpass Doctor Fate, Lord of Order and Klarion the witch boy, Lord of Chaos?
4OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzillaOh Dear! Is the DC Verse ready for an alternate Doctor Doom powered via the Sage Force? I think not. I applaud Vincent for not mixing up in hero drama. Question is though, will he succeed to rule DC Earth indefinitely till his dying breath? Will he do the OG Doctor Doom justice? We shall see. The superheroes will never know the threat that is growing, rising and coming their way. Cause by the time they do, it will be too late. Supervillains on the other hand, will experience a new type of fear never before realized when they get acquainted to the name Dr. Doom. Will Vincent learn magic to the same degree as Victor Von Doom, so he can rival or even surpass Doctor Fate, Lord of Order and Klarion the witch boy, Lord of Chaos?