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11/4/2019 c1 41Yasaonna-Chan
After what seemed like a normal day, the crew couldn't help but feel someone important from their lives suddenly had dissapeared. Who was this person and what caused this feeling even when they couldn't remember them? Perhaps the diary they found of the mystery person could clear it all up!

I like the premise. It makes me wanna read more since I wonder who the person could be. To be honest, reading the summary, I wasn't sure if I should read it, but seeing it's your first fanfic I still wanted to try. It's not bad! I would be careful with the random uppercases, since some people read that in their head as if the characters were yelling, and sometimes that just didn't fit.

Looking forward to more!

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