for Brian Shaw
23/8/2020 c1 Guest
Hi , I am interested in doing a version of your story.I enjoyed reading it and it gave me a few ideas.
Hi , I am interested in doing a version of your story.I enjoyed reading it and it gave me a few ideas.
1/8/2020 c1 Justnobody
Obviously, you are a beginner. But you hsve such a courage to write and post. You just need some improvements. I love brianxowen. I will wait for your improved fic someday. Goodluck.
Obviously, you are a beginner. But you hsve such a courage to write and post. You just need some improvements. I love brianxowen. I will wait for your improved fic someday. Goodluck.
12/29/2019 c1 Stopitplz
Improve yourself. You got it good.
Improve yourself. You got it good.
11/3/2019 c1 NeoScaz
No one wants your shitty fic, and the fact you've written most of it like a script tells me you don't know how to write at all. Go back to school.
No one wants your shitty fic, and the fact you've written most of it like a script tells me you don't know how to write at all. Go back to school.