for The Legend of Eva Bludvist9/20/2023 c10 Guest
This was the most confusing story ever. Never mind the fact that its dead. I couldn't figure out what was happening or who's POVS was who's since you fail to say which POV is which. You spell Drago's name wrong in the most current chapter despite spelling his name correctly in previous chapters, how on earth do you make that mistake?
Also you fail to properly explain how Eva ended up with Drago since you start off with somebody else called Fagnar killing her parents but sparing her and thats it no explanation how she went from with Fagnar to Drago. Why exactly did Drago decide to give her his family's surname? Did he start to see her as a daughter or sister? Did he actually care about Eva?
This was the most confusing story ever. Never mind the fact that its dead. I couldn't figure out what was happening or who's POVS was who's since you fail to say which POV is which. You spell Drago's name wrong in the most current chapter despite spelling his name correctly in previous chapters, how on earth do you make that mistake?
Also you fail to properly explain how Eva ended up with Drago since you start off with somebody else called Fagnar killing her parents but sparing her and thats it no explanation how she went from with Fagnar to Drago. Why exactly did Drago decide to give her his family's surname? Did he start to see her as a daughter or sister? Did he actually care about Eva?
3/20/2020 c10 
2Ninjacolin2000
This was a very interesting chapter! Finally, we're getting into uncharted territory, where the dragon riders start getting involved, our two characters start going out and furthering their agendas, and no doubt more. Looking forward to more!
2Ninjacolin2000This was a very interesting chapter! Finally, we're getting into uncharted territory, where the dragon riders start getting involved, our two characters start going out and furthering their agendas, and no doubt more. Looking forward to more!
11/9/2019 c7 Ninjacolin2000
Very exciting chapter! It's not very clear how the bottle broke, was it the quick exchange between them? Or did he break it in his fist accidentally?
Very exciting chapter! It's not very clear how the bottle broke, was it the quick exchange between them? Or did he break it in his fist accidentally?
11/6/2019 c4 Ninjacolin2000
Might sound like I'm tooting my own horn a bit along with this, but I'm enjoying this story. Looking forward to see how you carry it along.
Might sound like I'm tooting my own horn a bit along with this, but I'm enjoying this story. Looking forward to see how you carry it along.
11/5/2019 c3 Guest
Great story so far, love to see how this develops
Great story so far, love to see how this develops
11/3/2019 c1 Mariah
wow poor Eva her family killed and she had to stay with dragon hunters.
at least she is free now.
wow poor Eva her family killed and she had to stay with dragon hunters.
at least she is free now.
11/3/2019 c1 Ninjacolin2000
Looks like a dynamic beginning, I'm excited to see where this story goes! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
Looks like a dynamic beginning, I'm excited to see where this story goes! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!