for Doing the Work1/15 c1 Marz1
Very well written! I don't come across many stories where a civilian character's perspective is not on the polar extremes of terrified of shinobi or a rabid fan girl of shinobi. You do a great job of establishing personalities and adding realistic human reactions to a very unrealistic environment.
Very well written! I don't come across many stories where a civilian character's perspective is not on the polar extremes of terrified of shinobi or a rabid fan girl of shinobi. You do a great job of establishing personalities and adding realistic human reactions to a very unrealistic environment.
9/9/2024 c6 Guest
༼;༎ຶ ༎ຶ༽this was so good! Naomi is so coool! Amazing read
༼;༎ຶ ༎ຶ༽this was so good! Naomi is so coool! Amazing read
12/9/2023 c6 
1AnimeEverywhere
This is definitely one of the BEST Naruto fanfictions of all time. And I’ve read several great one’s out there. I’ve been avoiding it for a few weeks because I usually don’t read fanfics with OC as the main character, but this story has been on my to-read list for a while, with how much attention this one has been getting. And it really is well-deserved!
I don’t even know where you get the inspiration to write such a well-thought-out story! I’m absolutely stunned. I had a lot of fun reading it, thank you so much for publishing it online for everyone to enjoy!
I’ll definitely re-read this masterpiece, whenever I’m craving awesome stories with well-portrayed characters.
Thank you again for writing this absolute eye-opener. I enjoyed it immensely and hope you did too.
Bye~ Ame
1AnimeEverywhereThis is definitely one of the BEST Naruto fanfictions of all time. And I’ve read several great one’s out there. I’ve been avoiding it for a few weeks because I usually don’t read fanfics with OC as the main character, but this story has been on my to-read list for a while, with how much attention this one has been getting. And it really is well-deserved!
I don’t even know where you get the inspiration to write such a well-thought-out story! I’m absolutely stunned. I had a lot of fun reading it, thank you so much for publishing it online for everyone to enjoy!
I’ll definitely re-read this masterpiece, whenever I’m craving awesome stories with well-portrayed characters.
Thank you again for writing this absolute eye-opener. I enjoyed it immensely and hope you did too.
Bye~ Ame
1/5/2023 c1 bingo94
I loved it! I really appreciate the different take to the usual issues, very insightful and thought provoking. I think most people coming to read Naruto FanFiction enjoy a good battle, and I loved that you show not all battles are physical and bloody.
I loved it! I really appreciate the different take to the usual issues, very insightful and thought provoking. I think most people coming to read Naruto FanFiction enjoy a good battle, and I loved that you show not all battles are physical and bloody.
11/18/2022 c6 Dekuji
Krásné
Krásné
10/12/2022 c6 Guest
This story is so freaking good. It's the 3rd time I've read it, and it leaves me feeling so happy every time. What a dang good conclusion!
This story is so freaking good. It's the 3rd time I've read it, and it leaves me feeling so happy every time. What a dang good conclusion!
6/29/2022 c6 FL Flaumjaze
Wow. I'd hope that this is not the end and that you would make more chapters, but.. sigh. It was good, this kind of domesticity is something I really want. You have to keep away from violence sometimes. This is something I guarantee would reread back and back again.
Wow. I'd hope that this is not the end and that you would make more chapters, but.. sigh. It was good, this kind of domesticity is something I really want. You have to keep away from violence sometimes. This is something I guarantee would reread back and back again.
6/29/2022 c6 FL Flaumjaze
I like the fact that you used 'husband' instead of 'anata' or 'shoujin'. It makes me feel embarrassed, a thirdwheel, and left out just from that intimate calling.
I like the fact that you used 'husband' instead of 'anata' or 'shoujin'. It makes me feel embarrassed, a thirdwheel, and left out just from that intimate calling.