for Kiss Me, You Idiot1/19/2023 c33 JaysWorld2
So, I admire the shit out of your writing style and the stories you produce. Each one is unique and interesting and in some way relatable. You manage to lace in humor with drama and angst in a way that doesn't feel forced or unnatural. The characters are freaking real and flawed and _human_. So thank you for another great one
So, I admire the shit out of your writing style and the stories you produce. Each one is unique and interesting and in some way relatable. You manage to lace in humor with drama and angst in a way that doesn't feel forced or unnatural. The characters are freaking real and flawed and _human_. So thank you for another great one
8/20/2022 c33 
15ooza
hiking ew.
I will preface this by saying I don't have a motherly bone in my body. but I always think it's weird when people are like fuck it lets have a baby we don't need to be married. I'm always just shook over it. kind of like when I find out almost everyone I meet has done coke casually. same thing.
omg I love a good proposal. sigh.
also I'm miffed because you said you broke them up in the epilogue. and I avoided reading this all day because the last chapter was a bit tumultuous and when I saw how long this one was I was like nope, don't feel like angst today. and you wonder why I have trust issues?!
I loved these two. still forever laughing about him worrying about if it was too soon to get off because he didn't want her to tease him about it forever
15oozahiking ew.
I will preface this by saying I don't have a motherly bone in my body. but I always think it's weird when people are like fuck it lets have a baby we don't need to be married. I'm always just shook over it. kind of like when I find out almost everyone I meet has done coke casually. same thing.
omg I love a good proposal. sigh.
also I'm miffed because you said you broke them up in the epilogue. and I avoided reading this all day because the last chapter was a bit tumultuous and when I saw how long this one was I was like nope, don't feel like angst today. and you wonder why I have trust issues?!
I loved these two. still forever laughing about him worrying about if it was too soon to get off because he didn't want her to tease him about it forever
8/20/2022 c32 ooza
When did Edward become a prude sheesh. Ugh Bella's whole working thing. I can completely understand why he's upset. also it's the worst when someone gives someone a time and then disregards it. I'm triggered. triggered!
When did Edward become a prude sheesh. Ugh Bella's whole working thing. I can completely understand why he's upset. also it's the worst when someone gives someone a time and then disregards it. I'm triggered. triggered!
8/13/2022 c29 ooza
also re: last chapter. I wonder how many days he wondered if she opened the letter and if she'd visit him soon. *sobsobsob*
omg he sent flowers. man they'd have had a good time in that room iykwim.
yassss girl fuck it all and go get him!
also re: last chapter. I wonder how many days he wondered if she opened the letter and if she'd visit him soon. *sobsobsob*
omg he sent flowers. man they'd have had a good time in that room iykwim.
yassss girl fuck it all and go get him!
8/13/2022 c28 ooza
WHEN IS SHE GONNA OPEN THE LETTER? It's like a time capsule and it's killing me.
I mean... she could fly to Chicago...
omggggg she could fly to Chicago on his account! lollll sigh. gah. my heart.
WHEN IS SHE GONNA OPEN THE LETTER? It's like a time capsule and it's killing me.
I mean... she could fly to Chicago...
omggggg she could fly to Chicago on his account! lollll sigh. gah. my heart.
8/13/2022 c27 ooza
and Jasper makes an appearance. it didn't even cross my mind with the other roommate. I'm clearly off my game. man I would have liked to see how they told him about Alice and her first appearance lolllll
bet bella wished she knew she was in the good old days while she was still in them lol
just wait till Edward finds out Ben is going...
can't FaceTime you my girlfriend Kate is here.
about damn time SHEESH
and Jasper makes an appearance. it didn't even cross my mind with the other roommate. I'm clearly off my game. man I would have liked to see how they told him about Alice and her first appearance lolllll
bet bella wished she knew she was in the good old days while she was still in them lol
just wait till Edward finds out Ben is going...
can't FaceTime you my girlfriend Kate is here.
about damn time SHEESH
8/13/2022 c26 ooza
three months damn girl.
gosh what is Alice up to these days I wonder.
ooof I thought his reply was going to be a lot worse. probably because I was having divorce email correspondence flashbacks.
who says he didn't fuck the first girl to come along? jsjsjsjs
kidding... kidding.
three months damn girl.
gosh what is Alice up to these days I wonder.
ooof I thought his reply was going to be a lot worse. probably because I was having divorce email correspondence flashbacks.
who says he didn't fuck the first girl to come along? jsjsjsjs
kidding... kidding.
8/13/2022 c25 ooza
what vibe? DED.
at least Ben's a decent guy about it.
I fully support people dramatically leaving situations that are ridiculous.
there's something cathartic about when you finally understand things about yourself and everything snaps together and there's an a-ha moment
what vibe? DED.
at least Ben's a decent guy about it.
I fully support people dramatically leaving situations that are ridiculous.
there's something cathartic about when you finally understand things about yourself and everything snaps together and there's an a-ha moment
8/13/2022 c24 ooza
don't accidentally send those emails girl. I feel like just as he should have made a grand gesture, she shouldn't let him just leave and stop communication. I be like, I get your self preservation, but also fuck that shit because ily.
wait until her shit is together?! I'd be way too impatient for that shit.
don't accidentally send those emails girl. I feel like just as he should have made a grand gesture, she shouldn't let him just leave and stop communication. I be like, I get your self preservation, but also fuck that shit because ily.
wait until her shit is together?! I'd be way too impatient for that shit.
8/13/2022 c22 ooza
oh thank gawd he's still there.
so she can be friendly and let Ben buy her a drink but Edward can't be friendly and see drunken McCunterton home. I see.
I knew he wasn't planning to come back!
I mean, I get why she was so upset over the lie, to an extent. but like, girllllllll you think the next person you're with is gonna be perfect? no one's perfect.
"I'm pissed at you" FINALLY. grow a pair Edward lol
Bella for the love of God just please pull your head out of your butt! it's not too late. fix it. FIX IT.
*sobsobsob*
oh thank gawd he's still there.
so she can be friendly and let Ben buy her a drink but Edward can't be friendly and see drunken McCunterton home. I see.
I knew he wasn't planning to come back!
I mean, I get why she was so upset over the lie, to an extent. but like, girllllllll you think the next person you're with is gonna be perfect? no one's perfect.
"I'm pissed at you" FINALLY. grow a pair Edward lol
Bella for the love of God just please pull your head out of your butt! it's not too late. fix it. FIX IT.
*sobsobsob*