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9/30 c37 12JensenDaniels32
I mean, it's really well-written, but it's bullshit that Tanya and Viktorya can just get away with being complete pieces of shit and not be beaten senseless for it.
9/30 c36 JensenDaniels32
Well, this story is dogshit. I'm out.
9/30 c36 JensenDaniels32
I'd kill these bitches.
9/23 c35 JensenDaniels32
This story has just devolved into talking about paperwork and boring businesses, not much adventuring or action anymore. It's become dull.
9/23 c33 JensenDaniels32
i mean, it's written well, but it feels like the fight was all for nothing.
9/23 c33 JensenDaniels32
So Tanya didn't even kill the greater demon. Well this chapter is fucking crap.
9/23 c32 JensenDaniels32
Why hasn't she gotten the thing to change her gender yet?
9/22 c31 JensenDaniels32
Yeesh, Victoriya has become a mouthy little cunt, hasn't she? Someone should punch her in the face.
9/22 c27 JensenDaniels32
It took 27 freaking chapters before FINALLY getting to Kazuma, to canon. Why? On the other hand, FINALLY! WOOHOO!
9/22 c22 JensenDaniels32
It's fish or fishies, not fishes, author. Unless you're referring to schools of fish, but I highly doubt that Tanya would have enough room in her stomach to eat schools of fish.
9/20 c10 JensenDaniels32
AWESOME!
9/20 c6 JensenDaniels32
She's supposed to be strong to begin with, regardless of level, not some weak pussy. This is annoying.
9/19 c63 CoriumSporium
YEAAAAAAH ITS BACK

good chappie, building up tension for the big fight~
9/19 c63 7zakan
Great chapter!
8/15 c62 Guest
I think Moose has kinda lost it...
You ok down there?
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