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I mean, it's really well-written, but it's bullshit that Tanya and Viktorya can just get away with being complete pieces of shit and not be beaten senseless for it.
12JensenDaniels32I mean, it's really well-written, but it's bullshit that Tanya and Viktorya can just get away with being complete pieces of shit and not be beaten senseless for it.
9/23/2024 c35 JensenDaniels32
This story has just devolved into talking about paperwork and boring businesses, not much adventuring or action anymore. It's become dull.
This story has just devolved into talking about paperwork and boring businesses, not much adventuring or action anymore. It's become dull.
9/23/2024 c33 JensenDaniels32
i mean, it's written well, but it feels like the fight was all for nothing.
i mean, it's written well, but it feels like the fight was all for nothing.
9/23/2024 c33 JensenDaniels32
So Tanya didn't even kill the greater demon. Well this chapter is fucking crap.
So Tanya didn't even kill the greater demon. Well this chapter is fucking crap.
9/22/2024 c31 JensenDaniels32
Yeesh, Victoriya has become a mouthy little cunt, hasn't she? Someone should punch her in the face.
Yeesh, Victoriya has become a mouthy little cunt, hasn't she? Someone should punch her in the face.
9/22/2024 c27 JensenDaniels32
It took 27 freaking chapters before FINALLY getting to Kazuma, to canon. Why? On the other hand, FINALLY! WOOHOO!
It took 27 freaking chapters before FINALLY getting to Kazuma, to canon. Why? On the other hand, FINALLY! WOOHOO!
9/22/2024 c22 JensenDaniels32
It's fish or fishies, not fishes, author. Unless you're referring to schools of fish, but I highly doubt that Tanya would have enough room in her stomach to eat schools of fish.
It's fish or fishies, not fishes, author. Unless you're referring to schools of fish, but I highly doubt that Tanya would have enough room in her stomach to eat schools of fish.
9/20/2024 c6 JensenDaniels32
She's supposed to be strong to begin with, regardless of level, not some weak pussy. This is annoying.
She's supposed to be strong to begin with, regardless of level, not some weak pussy. This is annoying.