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2/1/2022 c2 Guest
the variable capitalization is just bad grammar. You need articles if writing smaller case.

And not a fan of your interpretation that Being X is actually "God" or something close to it. Canon heavily implies that he is more a devil, or A god/powerful entity, not God. It certainly acts more like a devil.
1/14/2022 c1 Guest
Tanya should've been hit by a truck, author. How can you get such a basic thing wrong?
1/13/2022 c43 Blank
300k words ago I was waiting for this and it’s finally here let’s goooo! I’m here for the rest of the story as long as you’re not done but it feels so good to be on this half of the slowburn
12/30/2021 c2 vera841
Holy heck! First time ever I see the protagonist not picking Aqua. This is incredible! I hope there won't be some cheap cop out where Aqua still somehow ends up in there.
12/30/2021 c43 AnimatedSkillz
nice story. Enjoyable read keep up the nice work .
12/29/2021 c43 s.k.f.f.f
woot, about time Tanya, good for you. and happy merry holidays.
12/29/2021 c19 s.k.f.f.f
as a war vetran she is, she continues to make mistakes and costly mistake and the arrogance she has, I hope she learns, but damn Mc is stupid even with all the shit going on. Well hopefully she may learn, which I don't think so, too much burden I guess and for the sake of plot.
12/29/2021 c19 bombbastik
I was looking for something humorous or lighthearted when I found this, and this isn’t that at all. Plus, this just doesn’t have that special spark of something I’m looking for, so sadly This is as far as I’m going. Thanks for an interesting read.
12/27/2021 c43 1bwburke94
Happy Visha is best Visha. Merry Christmas!
12/27/2021 c43 34EmperorNefarious1
At last. The moment we've all been waiting for.

And it didn't disappoint.
12/27/2021 c43 1neogoki
Tanya makes Being X think. And doesn't like thinking.
How horrible.*sarcasm blast*
He asks "Why" and ignores the answers.

He doesn't even want to examine his own side, procrastinating it with such determination. Preferring to hurt someone else rather than do something productive.
Sounds like denial too me and he knows it on some level.

And Eris is just about to break, because of her bad boss.
Unless her luck pulls a miracle she'll be another tragedy.
12/26/2021 c43 1Jctherebel
Absolutely amazing, glad it finally happened!
12/26/2021 c43 Pallaxxxx
asgsgdjshscgshGagqhagafFFFGFDgGD FINALLY! oh this was perfect, definitely worth the wait
12/26/2021 c43 Mernom
About time.
But the possible 'consequences' worry me.
12/26/2021 c43 NotaSingleChance
hooooooleeeeee shieeeeet

nice
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