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1ISleep
.. Did she completely forget that Nobles have even more power than the church? Even if she never interacted with them herself never again, they could easily make her life miserable with their influence.
1ISleep.. Did she completely forget that Nobles have even more power than the church? Even if she never interacted with them herself never again, they could easily make her life miserable with their influence.
12/8/2019 c19 some guy
You are really losing me with chapter 18 onwards. It's a mess of tactical fuckups, screwups, and stupidity all over the place from Tanya. Actively inviting an enemy mage to cast at will during an ongoing warzone, just to maybe learn a completely useless skill? You are pulling bullshit like that on the regular here. Consider what is actually happening and who your characters are before you have them do shit that doesn't make sense.
You are really losing me with chapter 18 onwards. It's a mess of tactical fuckups, screwups, and stupidity all over the place from Tanya. Actively inviting an enemy mage to cast at will during an ongoing warzone, just to maybe learn a completely useless skill? You are pulling bullshit like that on the regular here. Consider what is actually happening and who your characters are before you have them do shit that doesn't make sense.
12/8/2019 c20 vanhellsing9000
Great chapter i actually thought that the demon king was gunna have a nervous breakdown lol just wondering if lalatina will be rejoining tanya again and wat insane abilities will she be learning next anyhoo love the story and i carnt wait for the next chapter to come out keep up the great work
Great chapter i actually thought that the demon king was gunna have a nervous breakdown lol just wondering if lalatina will be rejoining tanya again and wat insane abilities will she be learning next anyhoo love the story and i carnt wait for the next chapter to come out keep up the great work
12/8/2019 c20 3Meliodas el Dragon
First of all, I want to congratulate you on the narrative and the development of your story, I have sincerely liked it, your story has many possibilities, I must admit that I am a big fan of the works of konosuba and youjo senki.
Well, what comes next is simply a suggestion for your story, you can take it into account, or not, however I want you to analyze the reasoning of my ideas.
The first would be, that you make tanya join the axis order, this would be with the purpose of annoying eris and especially being x, besides that in some future tanya and viktoriya can get married in the aqua religion. The reason why Tanya would be forced to join the axis order, would be for the purpose of being removed from the black list of the sky, therefore it would no longer be considered an atheist, and this would make the gods let her live In peace, of course Tanya would only be a member of the name axis, she would not be a religious fanatic.
However, Tanya could make fun of being x, scrubbing him that he can never take away his freedom to choose, and he would tell being X that he prefers to belong to a cult led by a silly and mediocre goddess to follow him.
This would make the being x, infuriated not only against tanya but also with the poor aqua, which would make his life impossible, by snatching his lost lamb.
There would come a time when being x, not only machinery plans terrible against tanya, but also plans to get rid of aqua and its cult. This fact would make the other gods stay distant and distrustful of being x.
The idea that I want to imply here, is that the gods themselves question the actions, and turn against being x.
If he is trying to end aqua right now, that would prevent me from being next tomorrow.
In the end, the same gods would be those who put a stop to being x. Aware that a deity that only causes chaos, death and destruction on its own whim is not worthy of God's title.
The second idea would be for Tanya to try to make the axis order work as an efficient company, and with the help of modern marketing to grow the religion of aqua, with the purpose of annoying the cult of eris and being x, rubbing them as An advertising campaign is well done to attract the attention of more believers.
Obviously Tanya would not help Aqua for free, since she would see many benefits while in a position of power. It would also be interesting that aqua could reduce mental pollution of tanya.
And the last idea is that tanya does not join the army of the demon king, it would be more interesting and more entertaining that she tried to deal with two enemies at the same time, on the one hand being x, and on the other the army of the demon king.
As I mentioned these are suggestions you can take them into account, or not. In the end this is your story, and you decide why to take it.
3Meliodas el DragonFirst of all, I want to congratulate you on the narrative and the development of your story, I have sincerely liked it, your story has many possibilities, I must admit that I am a big fan of the works of konosuba and youjo senki.
Well, what comes next is simply a suggestion for your story, you can take it into account, or not, however I want you to analyze the reasoning of my ideas.
The first would be, that you make tanya join the axis order, this would be with the purpose of annoying eris and especially being x, besides that in some future tanya and viktoriya can get married in the aqua religion. The reason why Tanya would be forced to join the axis order, would be for the purpose of being removed from the black list of the sky, therefore it would no longer be considered an atheist, and this would make the gods let her live In peace, of course Tanya would only be a member of the name axis, she would not be a religious fanatic.
However, Tanya could make fun of being x, scrubbing him that he can never take away his freedom to choose, and he would tell being X that he prefers to belong to a cult led by a silly and mediocre goddess to follow him.
This would make the being x, infuriated not only against tanya but also with the poor aqua, which would make his life impossible, by snatching his lost lamb.
There would come a time when being x, not only machinery plans terrible against tanya, but also plans to get rid of aqua and its cult. This fact would make the other gods stay distant and distrustful of being x.
The idea that I want to imply here, is that the gods themselves question the actions, and turn against being x.
If he is trying to end aqua right now, that would prevent me from being next tomorrow.
In the end, the same gods would be those who put a stop to being x. Aware that a deity that only causes chaos, death and destruction on its own whim is not worthy of God's title.
The second idea would be for Tanya to try to make the axis order work as an efficient company, and with the help of modern marketing to grow the religion of aqua, with the purpose of annoying the cult of eris and being x, rubbing them as An advertising campaign is well done to attract the attention of more believers.
Obviously Tanya would not help Aqua for free, since she would see many benefits while in a position of power. It would also be interesting that aqua could reduce mental pollution of tanya.
And the last idea is that tanya does not join the army of the demon king, it would be more interesting and more entertaining that she tried to deal with two enemies at the same time, on the one hand being x, and on the other the army of the demon king.
As I mentioned these are suggestions you can take them into account, or not. In the end this is your story, and you decide why to take it.
12/7/2019 c20 5Pyromania101
Just looked at your profile, and like "Mother's Basement", you miss the point on the near-rape scene. Yes, it has all the slapstick stuff, but NO ONE was making fun of Kazuma for what he went through: Aqua cradled his head in her lap and said comforting words, and Megumin told him about Yunyun's tattoo to cheer him up. When the chase was occurring, the girls were just as freaked out as he was and screamed for him to keep running, and were horrified when he was caught.
5Pyromania101Just looked at your profile, and like "Mother's Basement", you miss the point on the near-rape scene. Yes, it has all the slapstick stuff, but NO ONE was making fun of Kazuma for what he went through: Aqua cradled his head in her lap and said comforting words, and Megumin told him about Yunyun's tattoo to cheer him up. When the chase was occurring, the girls were just as freaked out as he was and screamed for him to keep running, and were horrified when he was caught.
12/7/2019 c20 14D.N.Works
Seems like the Demon Army is getting a nit more serious. And poor Wolfback, maybe she SHOULDN'T have drained her other half so much, considering we all know how it ended up as. Plus Tanya once more has to deal with shenanigans, but at least got to deal with the jerk of a Lord. Oh, and quick question, how does Darkness feel about Chris now with the whole attempt murder thing?
14D.N.WorksSeems like the Demon Army is getting a nit more serious. And poor Wolfback, maybe she SHOULDN'T have drained her other half so much, considering we all know how it ended up as. Plus Tanya once more has to deal with shenanigans, but at least got to deal with the jerk of a Lord. Oh, and quick question, how does Darkness feel about Chris now with the whole attempt murder thing?
12/7/2019 c20 10TheRangerBoy
Noice chapter.
I'm eager to see you hit the realm of the movie or even the novels beyond that.
10TheRangerBoyNoice chapter.
I'm eager to see you hit the realm of the movie or even the novels beyond that.
12/6/2019 c19 23Byakugan789
RE:sugarcanesoldier;RE:AnimeA55Kicker;
The thing with pedophiles in the church is a rather recent addition. Prior to Vladimir Lenin the catholic church policed itself pretty tightly and burnt pedophile clergy at the stake before they got much beyond small town cleric. Same with Rapist Friars who were hunted down by paladin. Their big problem before Lenin's very well publicized plans to undermine peoples trust in the church, was that it was a haven for gay men, who when discovered were shipped off to cloisters to do research and book keeping for the church and lesbians who were carted off to abbeys to be nuns away from the average perisher. BOTH were pretty well know to the public though. At current, there is just shy of open warfare in Vatican city between Lenin's Cardinals and the Loyalists. Both sides put out propaganda pretty regularly and there have been a number of high profile murders involving the conflict. Particularly since the most recent pope, Francis, took over and started calling everyone islamaphobes. Francis is one of Lenin's faction.
23Byakugan789RE:sugarcanesoldier;RE:AnimeA55Kicker;
The thing with pedophiles in the church is a rather recent addition. Prior to Vladimir Lenin the catholic church policed itself pretty tightly and burnt pedophile clergy at the stake before they got much beyond small town cleric. Same with Rapist Friars who were hunted down by paladin. Their big problem before Lenin's very well publicized plans to undermine peoples trust in the church, was that it was a haven for gay men, who when discovered were shipped off to cloisters to do research and book keeping for the church and lesbians who were carted off to abbeys to be nuns away from the average perisher. BOTH were pretty well know to the public though. At current, there is just shy of open warfare in Vatican city between Lenin's Cardinals and the Loyalists. Both sides put out propaganda pretty regularly and there have been a number of high profile murders involving the conflict. Particularly since the most recent pope, Francis, took over and started calling everyone islamaphobes. Francis is one of Lenin's faction.
12/5/2019 c18 Byakugan789
Nice fight scene. I like how competent you made her opponents. Most just leave them as scrubs unless they're an arc villain.
Nice fight scene. I like how competent you made her opponents. Most just leave them as scrubs unless they're an arc villain.
12/5/2019 c17 Byakugan789
well that's one hell of a solution. Pity about the whole thing with Chris and Darkness. I wonder though if Megumin is going to show up? I think Tanya will be pleased to have a bit of artillery again.
well that's one hell of a solution. Pity about the whole thing with Chris and Darkness. I wonder though if Megumin is going to show up? I think Tanya will be pleased to have a bit of artillery again.
12/5/2019 c15 Byakugan789
Speaking of the spell system. Tanya's spells, which aren't in the system, still work and are recorded by her card. Does that mean that she can craft new spells to sell and share? Or perhaps even a new class entirely? Call it Imperial Flight Mage. My favorite spells from Youjo Senki were the rare instances of telekinesis. But that's my favorite spell from any series. It's uses are just too many to count. Combat and civilian applicable too, which is uncommon for most magic.
Speaking of the spell system. Tanya's spells, which aren't in the system, still work and are recorded by her card. Does that mean that she can craft new spells to sell and share? Or perhaps even a new class entirely? Call it Imperial Flight Mage. My favorite spells from Youjo Senki were the rare instances of telekinesis. But that's my favorite spell from any series. It's uses are just too many to count. Combat and civilian applicable too, which is uncommon for most magic.