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11/12/2019 c15 GJMEGA
Love the story! I vote for a separate story for omakes.
11/12/2019 c15 1Final-Fan
As I said in my Ch. 6 review, I think the usual practice of omake being integrated into the story is fine, although I think it would be nice if they were in separate chapters so people could more easily find them; but if you have reason to think these particular omake would work better collected in a separate story then I of course defer to your inside knowledge.
11/12/2019 c12 5Lupin'sLuckyLibrary
Is this going to be a Tanya/Visha fic?
11/12/2019 c11 Lupin'sLuckyLibrary
Yes.

YES.

YESSSSSSSS.

Read Amur Enim Vult, BleedingBlade's writing is absolutely amazing, their attention to detail and the amount that they research for this fic is goddamn inspiring.
11/12/2019 c15 23Biigoh
I'm honestly surprised that Kazuya hasn't died and popped up yet...
11/12/2019 c14 leon solitario
Me encanto pero que paso con tiara de aumento de poder?
11/12/2019 c13 8L4 of the WEST
chris really should re think this course of action.
11/12/2019 c2 AnimeA55Kicker
It does seem a bit odd for a fic containing the rape of the MC to also have humor in the description.
11/12/2019 c13 1Final-Fan
I'm enjoying the story very much, and have no complaints about the pacing, but it seems very hard to believe that Eris would have a 100% success rate at her little recruiting session, unless the proposed mission is not what one would presume. Every single one of them has been on the wrong end of Tanya's gun, and while that memory does encourage holding a grudge, remembering that mortal terror also encourages them to realize that if they come back at Tanya with their superweapons restored she's going to be playing for keeps. I'm particularly surprised at Takashi; what, was his earlier speech just to mask cowardice? Or did Eris pull some kind of mind-whammy on them? I didn't think she was the type. In fact, I would think it's against the rules.

As for her reacting very badly to being accosted in her bed, I agree that she would be extremely likely to react with extreme violence to such an act, but on the other hand if they meet her in a dream where she can't harm them then they'll be able to live long enough to explain the situation.
11/12/2019 c14 14D.N.Works
Oh boy, Tanya's meltdown was interesting as her ally Viktoriya was a good one. Yet seems after a while, she found her answer and is back to normal, only for her to be kidnapped by Suscumbi. Plus I liked her relationship with Dust, mostly because how funny it was that she sorta controls him.
11/12/2019 c13 YuukiAsuna-Chan
Well Chris, hope you are happy as you probably just sentenced those 9 to death. I seriously doubt Tanya will let them off another time, it is just to idiotic to leave them be if they try something again and Tanya ain't stupid.
11/12/2019 c13 skrapsynneh
The pacing has been okay, but the differences between how Tanya and Kazuma redevelop and present technologies is different so there is not much engagement from that aspect. I look forwards to more.
11/12/2019 c12 skrapsynneh
I think there may be a typo where you said "Arenne on the Eastern Front", considering that Arenne is in the Rhinelands which is the Western Front, I assume that it should have been "or". That was very minor and can be ignored. Thank you for the chapter. I look forwards to more.
11/12/2019 c13 D.N.Works
Oh man, Tanya has a revenge squad after her now. With Chris/Eris taking advantage of their anger and junk against them. This should be good.
11/12/2019 c11 skrapsynneh
Thank you for the chapter. I look forwards to more. I eagerly anticipate the future Explosions.
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