for Third Time's the Charm11/8/2019 c1 Umaru the Unfeathered
Jesus Christ, how is it a thing?! Jesus Christ, I'm so glad this is a thing! Would you consider crossposting to the SpaceBattles forum?
Jesus Christ, how is it a thing?! Jesus Christ, I'm so glad this is a thing! Would you consider crossposting to the SpaceBattles forum?
11/8/2019 c10 Howdy
Love it, please continue writing, can't wait for the next chaps.
Love it, please continue writing, can't wait for the next chaps.
11/8/2019 c10 
6Vhcsatan
A história é interessante e a escrita envolvente. Por favor, continue escrevendo!
6VhcsatanA história é interessante e a escrita envolvente. Por favor, continue escrevendo!
11/6/2019 c10 8L4 of the WEST
As fellow writer I would suggest one ever 24 hours give or take. Puting them out as you did results in most people leaving reviews on the last chapter. You need those reviews to assure the next read that it is worth there time
8L4 of the WESTAs fellow writer I would suggest one ever 24 hours give or take. Puting them out as you did results in most people leaving reviews on the last chapter. You need those reviews to assure the next read that it is worth there time
11/6/2019 c9 L4 of the WEST
Well there month of debt and that ruffle about when some due to arrive. I see what you did there
Well there month of debt and that ruffle about when some due to arrive. I see what you did there
11/6/2019 c6 L4 of the WEST
Aqua more trouble than she worth? Noooooo, no really though she causes more trouble some times it workes out for the group, let look at that mansion overrun by ghost yes it here fault that happens. but because it was hunted they got the place for cheap if my memory serves.
Aqua more trouble than she worth? Noooooo, no really though she causes more trouble some times it workes out for the group, let look at that mansion overrun by ghost yes it here fault that happens. but because it was hunted they got the place for cheap if my memory serves.
11/6/2019 c10 Guest
Well... kinda feel sorry for tanya since Chris has misunderstandings abt her
Well... kinda feel sorry for tanya since Chris has misunderstandings abt her
11/6/2019 c3 L4 of the WEST
give up on the gun... yeah not only do I not see that happening I fear that Tanya would realize "hey wait a moment I could make money selling guns to there military and still be considered fighting the demon lord. "
give up on the gun... yeah not only do I not see that happening I fear that Tanya would realize "hey wait a moment I could make money selling guns to there military and still be considered fighting the demon lord. "
11/6/2019 c2 L4 of the WEST
what do I want to see... quite a bit really, don't want to see her take over what that guy name, kuziama? that guy story let her find her own party and deal with the situation that come from that.
what do I want to see... quite a bit really, don't want to see her take over what that guy name, kuziama? that guy story let her find her own party and deal with the situation that come from that.
11/6/2019 c1 L4 of the WEST
huh 36 chapter in backlog... wow... way to hog a good story to your self *swear at you for a bit* but besides that chapter one good, good starting point. as for what she chooses... I'm going to guess number 2
huh 36 chapter in backlog... wow... way to hog a good story to your self *swear at you for a bit* but besides that chapter one good, good starting point. as for what she chooses... I'm going to guess number 2