
8/9/2024 c12 Jamil Garcia
I'll be back in 2030 to see how this story ends. I hope they don't abandon it because it's interesting.
I'll be back in 2030 to see how this story ends. I hope they don't abandon it because it's interesting.
4/2/2024 c12 Guest
continue please
continue please
10/11/2023 c12
8Wickerstein
What I find incredibly hilarious in this chapter is that canon Naruto would have absolutely no problem allying with the Androids. He'd agree to it like a kid that's just been given candy with a wide smile on his face.

What I find incredibly hilarious in this chapter is that canon Naruto would have absolutely no problem allying with the Androids. He'd agree to it like a kid that's just been given candy with a wide smile on his face.
6/2/2023 c12
25mugiwara-no-lucy
HEY! How did I not see this!?
HAPPY to have you back! Will read this now!

HEY! How did I not see this!?
HAPPY to have you back! Will read this now!
5/30/2023 c12
17AntiHero627
Glad you’re back! I did not expect this kind of twist! Ikari Trunks! Cell! Android 21! Shion! I didn’t expect the Androids to make a friend in the pursuit of destruction. I’m really looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Glad you’re back! I did not expect this kind of twist! Ikari Trunks! Cell! Android 21! Shion! I didn’t expect the Androids to make a friend in the pursuit of destruction. I’m really looking forward to seeing what happens next!
5/30/2023 c12 phoinex slayer5
now that you're back to writing could you please update "devil of the league" I really like it
now that you're back to writing could you please update "devil of the league" I really like it
5/30/2023 c12
1SparkinClark
Welcome Back, Bro! Good to see you again! :)
This chapter was a good comeback!
So let's start of with Kakashi checking out Amai! I loved that part. XD
Looks like Team Z is gonna deal with even MORE trouble down the road, hope they get through it.
Wasn't expecting Trunks to go all Broly on everyone though! O.O
And that big reveal; HOLY CRAP! Overall, this was a very good chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.

Welcome Back, Bro! Good to see you again! :)
This chapter was a good comeback!
So let's start of with Kakashi checking out Amai! I loved that part. XD
Looks like Team Z is gonna deal with even MORE trouble down the road, hope they get through it.
Wasn't expecting Trunks to go all Broly on everyone though! O.O
And that big reveal; HOLY CRAP! Overall, this was a very good chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.
5/29/2023 c12 ShadowBloodedge9396
You liiiiiiiivvveeee! XD
Sorry, had to get that out of my system. But seriously, glad to see you're still kicking with this story. Great update...I like how Cell got bodied by both 21 and Trunks, but unfortunately he's still a slippery bastard...if I didn't know any better, I'd say he had absorbed Orochimaru at some point...assuming I haven't forgotten he already has.
So they got some stuff more clear with Shion's help...future still looking bleak though. But at least it helped them recognize Android 21 when she fully unveiled herself...not surprised she pulled the same trick she did in the game when the group first met her, feigning fear and all against Cell.
Also, good fight to calm Trunks down...so he's like Broly now when he looks at the moon, all the power none of the size...oh that would be great if Broly was still in this...
And finishing off with a cliffhanger of the main gang being unwillingly made to team up with 17 and 18(not sure how I feel about their continued humanization since these are Trunks' 17 and 18...I mean, at the very least still great touching on their good natured counterparts with park ranger 17) against 21...making me look forward even more to the next one!
You liiiiiiiivvveeee! XD
Sorry, had to get that out of my system. But seriously, glad to see you're still kicking with this story. Great update...I like how Cell got bodied by both 21 and Trunks, but unfortunately he's still a slippery bastard...if I didn't know any better, I'd say he had absorbed Orochimaru at some point...assuming I haven't forgotten he already has.
So they got some stuff more clear with Shion's help...future still looking bleak though. But at least it helped them recognize Android 21 when she fully unveiled herself...not surprised she pulled the same trick she did in the game when the group first met her, feigning fear and all against Cell.
Also, good fight to calm Trunks down...so he's like Broly now when he looks at the moon, all the power none of the size...oh that would be great if Broly was still in this...
And finishing off with a cliffhanger of the main gang being unwillingly made to team up with 17 and 18(not sure how I feel about their continued humanization since these are Trunks' 17 and 18...I mean, at the very least still great touching on their good natured counterparts with park ranger 17) against 21...making me look forward even more to the next one!
5/29/2023 c12
4KuroArashi94
Been waiting for this update, fantastic work. Having #21 be her own separate element with no allegiances adds a very chaotic element to the story. I am curious how you'll explain her Majin characteristics. As for Trunks, how powerful is he in comparison to #21? Was not expecting the Ikari form to show up here but I'm assuming it's leading to a rather obvious conclusion with Trunks' peak transformations. I'm curious, can't wait for the next one.

Been waiting for this update, fantastic work. Having #21 be her own separate element with no allegiances adds a very chaotic element to the story. I am curious how you'll explain her Majin characteristics. As for Trunks, how powerful is he in comparison to #21? Was not expecting the Ikari form to show up here but I'm assuming it's leading to a rather obvious conclusion with Trunks' peak transformations. I'm curious, can't wait for the next one.
5/28/2023 c12
5vonigner
Oh that's going to drop a wrench in Trunks' trust of everyone haha...
Nice.
Welcome back!

Oh that's going to drop a wrench in Trunks' trust of everyone haha...
Nice.
Welcome back!
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2/8/2022 c11 Von
Alright, I spent the last reading the whole thing (vol 1 and up to here).
It's been an interesting ride, thank you !
Alright, I spent the last reading the whole thing (vol 1 and up to here).
It's been an interesting ride, thank you !