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8/30 c3 11Repenexus
Honestly, I'd love for this story to continue
3/25 c3 Tony McNucklz
Not really enough to judge yet, but right now I'd like to see more.
10/9/2020 c3 Autistic Weaboo
Very interesting read, i hope you update soon
9/25/2020 c2 VtrCst
Strun Bah Qo!
7/15/2020 c2 Moi
Nice meme
6/22/2020 c1 Guest
fuck you cunt don't read
4/26/2020 c2 shaysa123
HAHAHHAHA the Skyrim reference got me, haha can't wait for more of this story keep ok keeping on!
3/22/2020 c3 Linarian
It's painful to know I'll likely have to wait quite a while for an update :(
3/4/2020 c3 3MystiYew
I do so love this so far. Make me more please.
3/4/2020 c1 MystiYew
A really nice start. We didn't really develop an emotional attachment, but it was written well enough that it still had some impact.
3/4/2020 c3 Guest
huh writing style was fine when your just informing readers about the past, but its not very descriptive and readers like an unending train of thought from someone with ADHD. At best your still just TELLING whats happening. That works for essays and book reports but its not meant for anything else! No successful author does this. It can be used! Very briefly and in small doses. Not for an a entire chapter/story. This is essentially no better then a quick script.
3/2/2020 c2 ragnarok042501
Those last few lines there have told me I'll like this story.
2/26/2020 c1 Lifelessman
Good Work...! 1
1/21/2020 c3 PasiveNox
Great
1/21/2020 c2 PasiveNox
Heehehehehe memes yah noce
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