4/29/2023 c1 6Primus2021
So 3 things...

1st when I started reading this and saw that Ichika and Madoka were going to room together, I had thought that they were going to bone each other, and then she invited Houki to the room and I thought that you were going to start it off with a threesome. I know that's false now, so, oh well.

2nd Gigantis Dragon aka Golden Dragon Monarch, I had thought that it was Azazel's armor from DXD, maybe the First Shift can be the form the the Artificial Sacred Gear, lol.

3rd, I agree with you on the White IS piece of cow dung! It's like a glass cannon!

11/12/2021 c4 Phatom666
Look up another IS fanfic called Seth Fairs. Kanzashi has a cool IS in it that could give you ideas.

5/24/2021 c1 Ichigay Sogay
Your paragraphing sucks as hell. You've got lots of mistakes and you cannot explain the scenery in words properly. Fix that, then move on with the story.

10/16/2020 c3 59Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov
Damn. This got pretty hot. Like pushing your rating hot. I don't complain.

About your AN, I don’t think you are really wrong. That guy got something for yanderes. That or he’s a complete numbskull when it comes to women. It’s nearly insulting.

I was kinda foreseeing that you would have made the twins visit Dan and Ran. That was fun if about the chats that Ichika had with Dan. I liked how the guy was commenting on the fact of how Dan thought while still fighting in the Infinite Stratos game. I heard that they had that game. It’s what it is.

Still, those remarks. I had to laugh on the stress reliever. That can be said about Ichika and Madoka as well. As for the tired twins, that was just something. About that whole tournament, you poured some more thoughts in that regard. About that flashback, that was with Tabane. I didn’t expect her to call Ichika and admit it.

She is still growing but Ichika you had to take her up on that offer. I think that she wouldn’t have minded one bit. It looks like Houki gave her a call. I don’t think that’s the last of the flashback. About the stuff with Rin, visiting by. Nice spin on the canon stuff. Again, she is closer to Madoka than she is to Ichika so it doesn’t hurt if they close the gap.

About Maya, she is really getting teased by the students. You can nearly imagine her fretting and pouting. Too cute to even think about it. It was great on how Ichika saved her. He can be really innocent at some regards.

About the stuff with Charles and Laura, that was a nice find. Instead of hating Ichika’s guts, the silverette refers to him as doctor. And they got some history. That was a great find. That was fun. With Charles, that was one shock indeed. Ichika really figured that out fast. We can only wonder how it goes from here.

Chifuyu’s dominatrix nature came into play now. That was funny. And well, with the stuff here, that guy should consider a job as comedian. I am laughing my ass off. With Ichika, that was even better and his comments. About the stuff he said, rule 63 fics of Infinite Stratos have been made. I haven’t found a great one yet.

About the stuff with Maya, that kiss. That guy got fucking lucky. It did happen in canon where he did end up on top of her and he kissed her while squeezing her butt. The reactions were fantastic. You are really going after making this happening. And I mean when I said that I found it kinda smutty. Chifuyu did a good job not murdering her.
That might just work out fine for Ichika where he is looking. About the stuff with the girls. Laura might be better for them. Now that I am reading this. You went on her faster. Not that it’s bad. And well, with Ichika. I do enjoy how he is just looking at Maya. He won’t be too wrong about the tits but why is he comparing the tits of his love interest with his sister?

With Chifuyu and her inner monologue, that is one thing in which we have done differently. Not spoiling anything on that regard. But that is one thing of character development. On how Ichika had grown and where she isn’t around as Ice Queen. It’s kinda weird that she is the one that is left behind despite being the oldest.

With Maya, I think that Chifuyu did approve but I would enjoy watching that. Damn, now I think of it. I should have done it as well. With Charles, we haven’t seen the end of that. By a long shot. I wonder how that will go.
Saluut.

10/14/2020 c1 Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov
When you write something similar, you like to see what the others do. You really wrapped quite a few episodes all in one setting of this fic. Not that I am complaining, just noticing. The stuff here is good although it's the firs time that I hear the name Balanced and Overpowered in the same line.

This was fun to read. Ichika is quite sassy although that might be a nice change. I like how this went. You really invested in those characters and the Infinite Stratos. I liked that. Some bits from Unlimited Bahamut Chronicles. Should check that out.

With the harem, I do not think that is going to happen. I like how you worked those girls over but it might ruin it. Maya is one good single lover though.

Either way, there was a lot of enjoyment for me here. Might get some inspiration for my own stuff. Some ideas.
Saluut.

9/28/2020 c3 LL
This is an amazing story mate. Has it’s own originality to it so it Differentiate from others.

8/6/2020 c3 Kelvin Wong Jun Sheng
It is a good story, pls continue. I love the storyline where it will goes. From what I see, I think the story can have more climax scene.

4/4/2020 c3 4Ancient Sith Tulak Hord
It's quite funny to see Ichika and Yamada interactions with each other. Madoka being a prankster is amusing.