
6/22 c2 carrkamar
Why is he making kiba such a dick i doubt kiba would actually care about same random
Orphan doent make sense to me but hey whatver floats your boat
Nigger
Why is he making kiba such a dick i doubt kiba would actually care about same random
Orphan doent make sense to me but hey whatver floats your boat
Nigger
6/22 c1 carrkamar
He has and weird vendetta against kiba. If i read it correctly he said he would kill him. Seems like the author is a weirdo thinking about becoming friends with shino. And thinking that people would look into him if he befriended Naruto, i promise nobody cares paranoid mc for literally no reason. I understand you want the story to be realistic but give the readers a break not everything needs to be analyzed hes definitely going to go way of canon with this story i bet by chapter 60 you wouldn’t be even able to tell whats going on just seems like that type of story. Id give this chapter a 2.9/5 because just like I mentioned before the weird vendetta against kiba and own author personal dislike towards sasuke and me being 99% sure that this will steer off of being canon and being a training read. And also he says the type of gamer system he has is nefred i doubt the author will stick to that for long….
He has and weird vendetta against kiba. If i read it correctly he said he would kill him. Seems like the author is a weirdo thinking about becoming friends with shino. And thinking that people would look into him if he befriended Naruto, i promise nobody cares paranoid mc for literally no reason. I understand you want the story to be realistic but give the readers a break not everything needs to be analyzed hes definitely going to go way of canon with this story i bet by chapter 60 you wouldn’t be even able to tell whats going on just seems like that type of story. Id give this chapter a 2.9/5 because just like I mentioned before the weird vendetta against kiba and own author personal dislike towards sasuke and me being 99% sure that this will steer off of being canon and being a training read. And also he says the type of gamer system he has is nefred i doubt the author will stick to that for long….
6/22 c121 fanficlovah69
No...NOT BARYON MODE?!
OR IS IT EVEN WORSE?!
I DONT WANT EIJI TO COME ALL THIS WAY AND LOOK AT NARUTO'S CORPSE
No...NOT BARYON MODE?!
OR IS IT EVEN WORSE?!
I DONT WANT EIJI TO COME ALL THIS WAY AND LOOK AT NARUTO'S CORPSE
6/21 c94 fanficlovah69
Haven't commented in a while, but damn...what a story this has been till now.
A chakra beast! A kotomatsukami level "almost" spammable genjutsu!
I have enjoyed the story so far, my sincere thanks to the author
Haven't commented in a while, but damn...what a story this has been till now.
A chakra beast! A kotomatsukami level "almost" spammable genjutsu!
I have enjoyed the story so far, my sincere thanks to the author
6/19 c39 fanficlovah69
Really love the Danzo and Hiruzen dynamic, and the death void.
My compliments and thanks to the author
Really love the Danzo and Hiruzen dynamic, and the death void.
My compliments and thanks to the author
6/19 c35 fanficlovah69
Yeah, espionage!
The thing ninjas primarily did and what the show misses out on showing 100%
Yeah, espionage!
The thing ninjas primarily did and what the show misses out on showing 100%
6/19 c30 fanficlovah69
I do believe this is the first major growth checkpoint as a shinobi Eiji has crossed.
I must admit, I am quite fond of this story by now.
As always, thanks to the author
I do believe this is the first major growth checkpoint as a shinobi Eiji has crossed.
I must admit, I am quite fond of this story by now.
As always, thanks to the author
6/18 c1 fanficlovah69
This believe it or not, is the first "gamer" fanfic I read (I have read mangas but not fanfics).
I am looking forward to enjoying this one. I am fond of "Dreaming of Sunshine"-esque OC inserts too.
My thanks to the author.
This believe it or not, is the first "gamer" fanfic I read (I have read mangas but not fanfics).
I am looking forward to enjoying this one. I am fond of "Dreaming of Sunshine"-esque OC inserts too.
My thanks to the author.