6/22 c1 carrkamar
He has and weird vendetta against kiba. If i read it correctly he said he would kill him. Seems like the author is a weirdo thinking about becoming friends with shino. And thinking that people would look into him if he befriended Naruto, i promise nobody cares paranoid mc for literally no reason. I understand you want the story to be realistic but give the readers a break not everything needs to be analyzed hes definitely going to go way of canon with this story i bet by chapter 60 you wouldn’t be even able to tell whats going on just seems like that type of story. Id give this chapter a 2.9/5 because just like I mentioned before the weird vendetta against kiba and own author personal dislike towards sasuke and me being 99% sure that this will steer off of being canon and being a training read. And also he says the type of gamer system he has is nefred i doubt the author will stick to that for long….

6/22 c134 fanficlovah69
Is that Shisui's mangekyou sharingan?

6/22 c127 fanficlovah69
I think Obito is gonna prematurely murder Konan and Nagato and bum rush Eiji

6/21 c94 fanficlovah69
Haven't commented in a while, but damn...what a story this has been till now.
A chakra beast! A kotomatsukami level "almost" spammable genjutsu!
I have enjoyed the story so far, my sincere thanks to the author

6/19 c43 fanficlovah69
Yep, Gara without Shukaku was just low Chunin level.
Good sweep

6/19 c39 fanficlovah69
Really love the Danzo and Hiruzen dynamic, and the death void.
My compliments and thanks to the author

6/19 c30 fanficlovah69
I do believe this is the first major growth checkpoint as a shinobi Eiji has crossed.
I must admit, I am quite fond of this story by now.
As always, thanks to the author