for Game of Shadows20h c69 Zwillingen700
Dear goodness, for such a short scene taking place in a prison cell, I have never witnessed so much smugness and schadenfreude. Well done, dear author, this was a chapter to be remembered.
Dear goodness, for such a short scene taking place in a prison cell, I have never witnessed so much smugness and schadenfreude. Well done, dear author, this was a chapter to be remembered.
23h c142 Angeloux
Cute ending. The writing itself was on point. Very good quality. The style… was not for me. But worth finishing.
Cute ending. The writing itself was on point. Very good quality. The style… was not for me. But worth finishing.
12/10 c138 Angeloux
The whole story was literally a slice of life fanfiction. Not just the last few chapters. I never thought I’d see someone turn a gamer Naruto fic into someone so … depressing? slow? drab? monotonous? I can’t find the adjective. But man, i’m gonna make myself finish this cause I’m too committed at this point.
The whole story was literally a slice of life fanfiction. Not just the last few chapters. I never thought I’d see someone turn a gamer Naruto fic into someone so … depressing? slow? drab? monotonous? I can’t find the adjective. But man, i’m gonna make myself finish this cause I’m too committed at this point.
12/7 c19 Zwillingen700
Holy Molly... now that Sakura scene was something to remember until the end of this story.
Holy Molly... now that Sakura scene was something to remember until the end of this story.
12/1 c144 SpaceCadet10
Considering that he has an older mind, I would like to see a story with Anko or Mei.
Considering that he has an older mind, I would like to see a story with Anko or Mei.
11/30 c144 natan.coltro
Cara, essa história foi incrível, acho que é a primeira de umas 5 fic de Naruto que tem final que eu li, mas a única boa kkk, normalmente os autores acabam se perdendo no final, mas essa foi bom do início ao fim, confesso que procurei apenas fanfics M pois esperava r18, mas essa eu nem liguei que não tinha, fiquei muito imerso na história.
Sinceramente sobre o Grupo, eu meio que não me importava tanto, e o Naruto parecia muito diferente as vezes, mas acho que é mais pessoal Doq um problema mesmo, as interações com o Sasuke e Ino eram minhas favoritas, e confesso que no Cap do 1 encontro, imaginei ele convidando a Ino, legal ter feito isso no último capítulo, sou de história de Harém, mas quando o desenvolvimento é bem feito não ligo de ser monogâmico, Tayuya é muito legal, vou conferir a fic de pokémon agr, bom trabalho!
Cara, essa história foi incrível, acho que é a primeira de umas 5 fic de Naruto que tem final que eu li, mas a única boa kkk, normalmente os autores acabam se perdendo no final, mas essa foi bom do início ao fim, confesso que procurei apenas fanfics M pois esperava r18, mas essa eu nem liguei que não tinha, fiquei muito imerso na história.
Sinceramente sobre o Grupo, eu meio que não me importava tanto, e o Naruto parecia muito diferente as vezes, mas acho que é mais pessoal Doq um problema mesmo, as interações com o Sasuke e Ino eram minhas favoritas, e confesso que no Cap do 1 encontro, imaginei ele convidando a Ino, legal ter feito isso no último capítulo, sou de história de Harém, mas quando o desenvolvimento é bem feito não ligo de ser monogâmico, Tayuya é muito legal, vou conferir a fic de pokémon agr, bom trabalho!
11/30 c144 madarawank1
I was just beginning to starve, but you showed up and offered me a bowl of Peak.
Very much enjoyed this chapter. The Ino Ship felt really good (I was rooting for her initially). Either way, love GoS and will probably read it a third time one day.
I was just beginning to starve, but you showed up and offered me a bowl of Peak.
Very much enjoyed this chapter. The Ino Ship felt really good (I was rooting for her initially). Either way, love GoS and will probably read it a third time one day.
11/29 c144 Highostrich
Man, this chapter just proved to me that Ino would've been the better option for your story. I thought that was the plan at the start until you diverted it to Tayuya.
You could have Grown Ino as a character more alongside Eiji from the start. Great chapter btw
Man, this chapter just proved to me that Ino would've been the better option for your story. I thought that was the plan at the start until you diverted it to Tayuya.
You could have Grown Ino as a character more alongside Eiji from the start. Great chapter btw