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50alleycat34
fight to the death between wendy and Pacifica? grenda and candy jumping in cause Mason? possible throuple? find out next time on the next, dragon ball z

fight to the death between wendy and Pacifica? grenda and candy jumping in cause Mason? possible throuple? find out next time on the next, dragon ball z
2/8/2023 c3 maxperseus130
I really wanna say MasonxWendy 'cause of course, especially since they are so much closer in age in your fic, but MasonxPacifica would be awesome too. Though that last one is also a little cliché I suppose... the queen bee and the punk is surely overdone by now. Unless all three are in a relationship, but that's probaly a little too much wish-fulfillment.
I really wanna say MasonxWendy 'cause of course, especially since they are so much closer in age in your fic, but MasonxPacifica would be awesome too. Though that last one is also a little cliché I suppose... the queen bee and the punk is surely overdone by now. Unless all three are in a relationship, but that's probaly a little too much wish-fulfillment.
8/24/2022 c10 techtsumi
You are one of my most favorite authors, the way you write these fanfics is just amazing too bad almost all of your works are uncomplete.
You are one of my most favorite authors, the way you write these fanfics is just amazing too bad almost all of your works are uncomplete.
8/22/2022 c10 Guest
Mate do you mind continuing this, i know you ain’t ded cuz ya make new stories and update your other stuff so if ya could make another chapter to this it would make my month i guess coz this is really great stuff
Cheers
Mate do you mind continuing this, i know you ain’t ded cuz ya make new stories and update your other stuff so if ya could make another chapter to this it would make my month i guess coz this is really great stuff
Cheers
7/8/2022 c10 Guest
Update please this is so interesting
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1/15/2022 c10
2Psychochiken
Great story so far, but is there any chance for there to be a harem/polyamorous ending(that includes Mabel)? I know it's asking for a lot, but is it wrong for me to want ALL the girls to be happy with Mason? Happy endings like that are the best endings in my opinion.

Great story so far, but is there any chance for there to be a harem/polyamorous ending(that includes Mabel)? I know it's asking for a lot, but is it wrong for me to want ALL the girls to be happy with Mason? Happy endings like that are the best endings in my opinion.
1/12/2022 c10
1EmperorSnorlax
Wendy is soooo faf behind in the leadrerboard for mason's affections. Kind of sad tbh, does this mean we're getting a brawl for masom next chap?

Wendy is soooo faf behind in the leadrerboard for mason's affections. Kind of sad tbh, does this mean we're getting a brawl for masom next chap?
1/12/2022 c7 EmperorSnorlax
This went a bit too fast for my liking, wouldve been a bit better if u fleshed it out in 2 chapters but the end part where the Ghost taks to Pacifica nicely done, I loved that he saw that she was different than her ancestors and implored her to actually be better, thats nice to see that he isnt all filled with vengeance lol
This went a bit too fast for my liking, wouldve been a bit better if u fleshed it out in 2 chapters but the end part where the Ghost taks to Pacifica nicely done, I loved that he saw that she was different than her ancestors and implored her to actually be better, thats nice to see that he isnt all filled with vengeance lol