for Sword and Shield11/17/2019 c1 Guest
Wonder if either of them will recognize they both have a japanese name.
Wonder if either of them will recognize they both have a japanese name.
11/16/2019 c1 MrX
You forgot to put the creation of temporary circuits in the list of skills of Shirou.
Had he already learned kyudo at the age of 12?
Gaia in this world instead of fighting the mage-craft supports it.
Will Shirou acquire the ability to perceive magic early?
Raptalia will stick to him as he will protect her from being mistreated by Naofumi because at first he behaved like an asshole.
Will Shirou teach kendo to her?
Naofumi should recover much earlier by finding out what happened to Shirou seeing himself in him.
Will Atla be healed with Avalon? In that case the origin of her could change into a sheath by attaching to Shirou.
Naofumi will enjoy seeing the soap opera that will become his party.
It is fate that Shirou is a protagonist eroge.
What will happen when he meets with the Legendary Holy Sword?
Resonance of the sword!
You forgot to put the creation of temporary circuits in the list of skills of Shirou.
Had he already learned kyudo at the age of 12?
Gaia in this world instead of fighting the mage-craft supports it.
Will Shirou acquire the ability to perceive magic early?
Raptalia will stick to him as he will protect her from being mistreated by Naofumi because at first he behaved like an asshole.
Will Shirou teach kendo to her?
Naofumi should recover much earlier by finding out what happened to Shirou seeing himself in him.
Will Atla be healed with Avalon? In that case the origin of her could change into a sheath by attaching to Shirou.
Naofumi will enjoy seeing the soap opera that will become his party.
It is fate that Shirou is a protagonist eroge.
What will happen when he meets with the Legendary Holy Sword?
Resonance of the sword!
11/16/2019 c1 
25Dantrlan
Bien no se que pensar sobre esto, no me gusta nada de nada Shirou siendo exclavo, espero tenga rule breaker para liberarse
25DantrlanBien no se que pensar sobre esto, no me gusta nada de nada Shirou siendo exclavo, espero tenga rule breaker para liberarse
11/16/2019 c1 10StoryReiter
This world is either going to make or break Shirou. His ability to understand blades and copy them is going to be game changer for Naofumi. Hopefully Naofumi or rather mostly Shirou will be able to compromise with Naofumi's capitalism. He's been smarter and more observant than most. Best case scenario Shirou gains UBW lite in terms of self awareness as well as compromise and worst case is he becomes shackled by the slave crest for his own good while he stews to do something more stupid in the bigger picture. Eh, Naofumi's always been good at those and kids despite being abrasive like a cactus at the start. Also wondering if Shirou's abnormality beneath it all will be noticed. Sorry its just that a lot of things can be looked forward to in your story and thats just the character interactions added for the fact that he's really young. Few and far between have been read by me. Plotwise as you say could change many things. Thank you and looking forward to more. Take care and have a good day author.
10StoryReiterThis world is either going to make or break Shirou. His ability to understand blades and copy them is going to be game changer for Naofumi. Hopefully Naofumi or rather mostly Shirou will be able to compromise with Naofumi's capitalism. He's been smarter and more observant than most. Best case scenario Shirou gains UBW lite in terms of self awareness as well as compromise and worst case is he becomes shackled by the slave crest for his own good while he stews to do something more stupid in the bigger picture. Eh, Naofumi's always been good at those and kids despite being abrasive like a cactus at the start. Also wondering if Shirou's abnormality beneath it all will be noticed. Sorry its just that a lot of things can be looked forward to in your story and thats just the character interactions added for the fact that he's really young. Few and far between have been read by me. Plotwise as you say could change many things. Thank you and looking forward to more. Take care and have a good day author.
11/16/2019 c1 1SentinalSlice
I’m interested to see where this goes, but I don’t want Shirou to get his age sped up, that would make things really awkward if he ever gets home. Also small Shirou is cute Shirou.
Anyway, please keep up the great work!
1SentinalSliceI’m interested to see where this goes, but I don’t want Shirou to get his age sped up, that would make things really awkward if he ever gets home. Also small Shirou is cute Shirou.
Anyway, please keep up the great work!
11/16/2019 c1 AnimeA55Kicker
Now the real question is when Shirou was taken from, and if he has any NP in his reality marble, bc rule breaker would be a god sent here
Now the real question is when Shirou was taken from, and if he has any NP in his reality marble, bc rule breaker would be a god sent here
11/16/2019 c1 Halo
I wonder how soon Naofumi is gonna notice that Shirou knows Japanese
Depends on how well he adjusted to a second language
I wonder how soon Naofumi is gonna notice that Shirou knows Japanese
Depends on how well he adjusted to a second language
11/16/2019 c1 2dragonbornthesam
Please continue this. It's an interesting premise that I've rarely seen before.
2dragonbornthesamPlease continue this. It's an interesting premise that I've rarely seen before.
11/16/2019 c1 fanreader18
Hmm. Eh. Could be interesting. Provided he breaks out of the chains first. Otherwise nah.
Hmm. Eh. Could be interesting. Provided he breaks out of the chains first. Otherwise nah.