for Promise you Heaven11/24/2022 c5 CadenR24
I hardly read fan fiction anymore, though on days where I seek the comfort of an old familiar past time I seem to on occasion stumble upon a story that changes how I view other works. This one easily takes that. The writing, though the pov changes were confusing at first, became a staple and a great way to see both sides of a story. I loved it. Clearly there was a great amount of attention put into it. I’m assuming you’ve laid this story to rest, as most of the best ones usually do. And though I could beg you to continue. I find it easier to say thank you for what you’ve done. Thank you for putting time into this. it was a genuinely fantastic experience. Thank you
I hardly read fan fiction anymore, though on days where I seek the comfort of an old familiar past time I seem to on occasion stumble upon a story that changes how I view other works. This one easily takes that. The writing, though the pov changes were confusing at first, became a staple and a great way to see both sides of a story. I loved it. Clearly there was a great amount of attention put into it. I’m assuming you’ve laid this story to rest, as most of the best ones usually do. And though I could beg you to continue. I find it easier to say thank you for what you’ve done. Thank you for putting time into this. it was a genuinely fantastic experience. Thank you
6/8/2022 c2 VinTEB
I like this! Especially the interactions of the player and Kris! Wish I could see more of this!
I like this! Especially the interactions of the player and Kris! Wish I could see more of this!
10/1/2021 c5 Cyndrodos
Since this story was last updated 2019,i have little hope you read this,but still, i got to try. I am truly baffled. I have read many storys on this site, spanning many franchises and genres. This is the first Deltarune story i ever clicked on. I am so glad i did. Never have i ever seen such an amazing writing style,great narrative,smart,funny writing with great pacing, and just plain cool narrator perspective as in this story. I am sad there are only so few chapters, but i was never so glad reading text as today. I thought of writing you directly, but i think this comment should be here,so maybe others will read your story because of it. All that praise may seem melodramatic and wierd,but for what its worth coming from a random person ,thank you for writing this,and hopefully the recent release of chapter 2 brings you back for some more.
Since this story was last updated 2019,i have little hope you read this,but still, i got to try. I am truly baffled. I have read many storys on this site, spanning many franchises and genres. This is the first Deltarune story i ever clicked on. I am so glad i did. Never have i ever seen such an amazing writing style,great narrative,smart,funny writing with great pacing, and just plain cool narrator perspective as in this story. I am sad there are only so few chapters, but i was never so glad reading text as today. I thought of writing you directly, but i think this comment should be here,so maybe others will read your story because of it. All that praise may seem melodramatic and wierd,but for what its worth coming from a random person ,thank you for writing this,and hopefully the recent release of chapter 2 brings you back for some more.
9/25/2021 c5 
3Mr.Vaster
Very likely to be one of the, if not the, most sharply written stories I've read on here. Absolutely fantastic.
3Mr.VasterVery likely to be one of the, if not the, most sharply written stories I've read on here. Absolutely fantastic.
9/12/2021 c5 11Alamandorious
Nicely done. I was hoping for a kiss, but this was wholesome. You do an amazing job with a young, budding romance, and I can't wait to see it bloom.
11AlamandoriousNicely done. I was hoping for a kiss, but this was wholesome. You do an amazing job with a young, budding romance, and I can't wait to see it bloom.
9/10/2021 c5 18EquinoxWolf
This chapter certainly had multiple surprises. I didn't expect anything in it.
18EquinoxWolfThis chapter certainly had multiple surprises. I didn't expect anything in it.
7/26/2021 c4 11Alamandorious
Glad to see you continued writing! Loving the 'slice of life' feel you've got going here.
Please keep it up!
11AlamandoriousGlad to see you continued writing! Loving the 'slice of life' feel you've got going here.
Please keep it up!
7/26/2021 c4 18EquinoxWolf
Well that last sentence didn't sound ominous at all.
For a chapter that didn't feature particular characters, you did a good job fleshing them out. One of the things I adore about this story is how poetic everything feels.
18EquinoxWolfWell that last sentence didn't sound ominous at all.
For a chapter that didn't feature particular characters, you did a good job fleshing them out. One of the things I adore about this story is how poetic everything feels.
3/10/2021 c3 EquinoxWolf
I'm glad to see this updated. There's a few changes of perspective where a line break might be beneficial. Was still a captivating chapter.
I'm glad to see this updated. There's a few changes of perspective where a line break might be beneficial. Was still a captivating chapter.