for Torn Away1/8 c1 OliviaInkwell
Hello Panda Bear! I wish that you are staying healthy and well. I’m a professional commission artist, and I’ve recently come across your story "Torn Away" and found it absolutely captivating. My commissions are open at the moment, and I’d be thrilled to adapt your story into a comic. Your story has incredible potential, and I’d love to discuss it with you to bring it to life through my artwork. If you’re interested, let’s discuss how we can work together on this exciting project! You can reach me out on my discord (olivink). Will be waiting for a positive response from you soon
Hello Panda Bear! I wish that you are staying healthy and well. I’m a professional commission artist, and I’ve recently come across your story "Torn Away" and found it absolutely captivating. My commissions are open at the moment, and I’d be thrilled to adapt your story into a comic. Your story has incredible potential, and I’d love to discuss it with you to bring it to life through my artwork. If you’re interested, let’s discuss how we can work together on this exciting project! You can reach me out on my discord (olivink). Will be waiting for a positive response from you soon
5/28/2022 c2 Guest
I love this so much please continue it is amazing so far and i cant wait to see what happens next!
I love this so much please continue it is amazing so far and i cant wait to see what happens next!
2/27/2021 c2 
4MissBlackRock
The story is pretty nice so far! It’s well written, it has some good characters, and some nice and simple interactions. It’s always nice to see people have the guts to throw in OCs into the Tron FanFiction community, since most people just write stories about the canon characters. So this is a nice little breath of fresh air! Paradis is an okay character so far. Maybe she just needs to grow on me more, but... she seems like she isn’t the best at making smart choices. It might just be because she’s a dumb teenager, but hey, whatever! I definitely feel bad for her though. Her life is terrible. Abby is cool already, but I’m still a bit unsure of what she’s all about. Some sort of traitorous Siren? GUS is very cool too, I was very impressed by a User actually creating a program on-screen like that. Ginger, Riley, and Kristophen were all nice, too. Those rape scenes were scary to read, though. Very explicit shit there...
Only criticism I’d have is that the story moves very quickly. Some cool Tron stuff that a User wouldn’t understand is skipped over and Paradis knows it just like that. But other than that, I can’t think of anything else! I like the Tron: Uprising style of clothes, with the secondary circuits and the bodysuits, combined with the armor from Legacy. Cool stuff! I see that the story hasn’t been updated in a while, but hey, life gets busy! Happy writing and I hope to see more in the future!
4MissBlackRockThe story is pretty nice so far! It’s well written, it has some good characters, and some nice and simple interactions. It’s always nice to see people have the guts to throw in OCs into the Tron FanFiction community, since most people just write stories about the canon characters. So this is a nice little breath of fresh air! Paradis is an okay character so far. Maybe she just needs to grow on me more, but... she seems like she isn’t the best at making smart choices. It might just be because she’s a dumb teenager, but hey, whatever! I definitely feel bad for her though. Her life is terrible. Abby is cool already, but I’m still a bit unsure of what she’s all about. Some sort of traitorous Siren? GUS is very cool too, I was very impressed by a User actually creating a program on-screen like that. Ginger, Riley, and Kristophen were all nice, too. Those rape scenes were scary to read, though. Very explicit shit there...
Only criticism I’d have is that the story moves very quickly. Some cool Tron stuff that a User wouldn’t understand is skipped over and Paradis knows it just like that. But other than that, I can’t think of anything else! I like the Tron: Uprising style of clothes, with the secondary circuits and the bodysuits, combined with the armor from Legacy. Cool stuff! I see that the story hasn’t been updated in a while, but hey, life gets busy! Happy writing and I hope to see more in the future!