
13h c1 Nyra Callen
Hi, I'm Nyra Callen!
I just finished reading your story, and I’m genuinely blown away. Your storytelling is so vivid and immersive—it felt like I was living every moment alongside your characters. The depth, the emotion, the twists... everything was masterfully done. You have a rare talent, and I truly believe your work deserves to be seen and celebrated widely. I’d love to share a more detailed review if you're open to it. Please keep writing—your gift is something truly special!.
Hi, I'm Nyra Callen!
I just finished reading your story, and I’m genuinely blown away. Your storytelling is so vivid and immersive—it felt like I was living every moment alongside your characters. The depth, the emotion, the twists... everything was masterfully done. You have a rare talent, and I truly believe your work deserves to be seen and celebrated widely. I’d love to share a more detailed review if you're open to it. Please keep writing—your gift is something truly special!.
5/2 c27 Sungren
You know, technically, sasuke and itachi should be able to just trade eyes to both get eternal Mangekyou, theres nothing that says it shouldnt work, i hope theres no drama with them going half blind
You know, technically, sasuke and itachi should be able to just trade eyes to both get eternal Mangekyou, theres nothing that says it shouldnt work, i hope theres no drama with them going half blind
5/2 c1 AmeliaJane9299
This story takes a fresh and captivating approach to the Naruto universe, offering an intriguing twist on Sakura's character with a reincarnation angle. The narrator's self-awareness and witty commentary about their new life add an engaging layer of humor and depth. The blend of familiar elements and unique perspective makes this a compelling and fun read, setting the stage for an exciting journey ahead. Plus, I have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you!
This story takes a fresh and captivating approach to the Naruto universe, offering an intriguing twist on Sakura's character with a reincarnation angle. The narrator's self-awareness and witty commentary about their new life add an engaging layer of humor and depth. The blend of familiar elements and unique perspective makes this a compelling and fun read, setting the stage for an exciting journey ahead. Plus, I have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you!
4/9 c116 ThatOneRando
ahhhhhhhg! I need more soup!
ahhhhhhhg! I need more soup!
3/3 c1 ElysianStrokes
Dear Author,
I hope you're doing well!
I just finished reading your story Thrill Seeker and I have to say – wow, I was completely hooked! Your writing is so engaging, and I can already picture it as a beautiful comic or animation. I truly believe it has the potential to reach new heights through art, and I’d love to help make that happen.
My name is Elysian Strokes, and I’m a professional artist who specializes in comics, manga, character design, and illustrations. While I offer a range of artistic services, my passion really lies in bringing stories like yours to life through comics and manga.
If you’re interested in commissioning artwork, I’d be more than happy to chat about how I can help turn your vision into something visual. You can reach me anytime through:
Discord: elysianstroke
Instagram: elysianstrokesofficial
Email: elysianstrokesofficial gmail. com
I’d love to hear from you and see how I can help make your story even more amazing through art!
Warmly,
Elysian Strokes
Dear Author,
I hope you're doing well!
I just finished reading your story Thrill Seeker and I have to say – wow, I was completely hooked! Your writing is so engaging, and I can already picture it as a beautiful comic or animation. I truly believe it has the potential to reach new heights through art, and I’d love to help make that happen.
My name is Elysian Strokes, and I’m a professional artist who specializes in comics, manga, character design, and illustrations. While I offer a range of artistic services, my passion really lies in bringing stories like yours to life through comics and manga.
If you’re interested in commissioning artwork, I’d be more than happy to chat about how I can help turn your vision into something visual. You can reach me anytime through:
Discord: elysianstroke
Instagram: elysianstrokesofficial
Email: elysianstrokesofficial gmail. com
I’d love to hear from you and see how I can help make your story even more amazing through art!
Warmly,
Elysian Strokes
3/2 c116 Nai Darkor
guy offered.
- accidentally small
Always just seal all your problems. Nothing can and will go wrong.
guy offered.
- accidentally small
Always just seal all your problems. Nothing can and will go wrong.
2/24 c115 Guest
Hi there, I was one of those that complained about the first chapters grammar and readability. Well after the first part it corrected itself mostly and I have to concede I was too invested in the story to notice. I have to say this is one of the best fanfic I ever red and I did read some !
The story and character development were professionally done and the reader interest was always captured. The adjective to describe this story was « professional » for sure and Harry-Potter’ level professional I mean. I hope the writer took pleasure writing and will continue to create new stories ! I will follow them for sure ! XX
Hi there, I was one of those that complained about the first chapters grammar and readability. Well after the first part it corrected itself mostly and I have to concede I was too invested in the story to notice. I have to say this is one of the best fanfic I ever red and I did read some !
The story and character development were professionally done and the reader interest was always captured. The adjective to describe this story was « professional » for sure and Harry-Potter’ level professional I mean. I hope the writer took pleasure writing and will continue to create new stories ! I will follow them for sure ! XX
2/21 c1 Guest
Well some… hum… many typos
Well some… hum… many typos
2/2 c114 ThatOneRando
Alright, I gave this fic some shit but it actually pulled through in the end. The strange spectrum like affixation with music that goes literally unexplained and unaddressed the entire story is literally the problem. If the mc is a sensor, that's a fucking massive plot point that should be fucking talked about by the characters. Actually, the entire story is missing basically all other character POV's. Idk how someone can write a naruto fanfic and not show Hiruzen claiming that he's the hokage to Danzo's face and Danzo telling him that he'll regret whatever it is that he's doing.
Alright, I gave this fic some shit but it actually pulled through in the end. The strange spectrum like affixation with music that goes literally unexplained and unaddressed the entire story is literally the problem. If the mc is a sensor, that's a fucking massive plot point that should be fucking talked about by the characters. Actually, the entire story is missing basically all other character POV's. Idk how someone can write a naruto fanfic and not show Hiruzen claiming that he's the hokage to Danzo's face and Danzo telling him that he'll regret whatever it is that he's doing.
1/25 c5 ThatOneRando
"Wow! This is such a lovely picnic! I hope we have enough food for everyone."
"That reminds me, Sasuke. How did you enjoy the HOKAGE's speech?"
Sasuke: "It was okay but it lasted so long, I was bored."
Naruto: "Yeah Giji always talks too long."
Hinata whispers too quietly for anyone to hear: "Naruto-kun"
"Your DAD looked kind of stressed there at the end, Sasuke. Is everything okay with the clan at home?"
Sasuke: "Yeah he seemed kinda upset, but then he looked all weird for a second, I don't get it."
"I know exactly what you mean, my MOM was giving me this strange look the entire time that INO girl was talking to me."
"Wow! This is such a lovely picnic! I hope we have enough food for everyone."
"That reminds me, Sasuke. How did you enjoy the HOKAGE's speech?"
Sasuke: "It was okay but it lasted so long, I was bored."
Naruto: "Yeah Giji always talks too long."
Hinata whispers too quietly for anyone to hear: "Naruto-kun"
"Your DAD looked kind of stressed there at the end, Sasuke. Is everything okay with the clan at home?"
Sasuke: "Yeah he seemed kinda upset, but then he looked all weird for a second, I don't get it."
"I know exactly what you mean, my MOM was giving me this strange look the entire time that INO girl was talking to me."
1/25 c114 ThatOneRando
I've haven't been as disappointed in a story so quickly as I have with this one. Reading this story is borderline impossible. Nearly every sentence is incoherent, it almost feels like machine translation but this is even harder to understand than a machine translation.
Too many things in this novel are just fucking weird nonsensical bullshit. Phrases like "sakura axe" or "beats". What the fuck is going on here? Is this a naruto x music anime crossover or some shit? I have no idea where these terms come from, they aren't explained in any way and on top of all of this, I can't tell if these terms are a translation error, a side effect of piss poor understanding of the english language or some strange euphemism.
Story reads as if the author is on drugs. It feels like the story needs an english translation for the english translation. I get the feeling that the author has a raging hardon for of all things 'music' and seems to think that their borderline on the spectrum idiosyncrasies make a single lick of sense to the rest of us, which is obviously false.
I've haven't been as disappointed in a story so quickly as I have with this one. Reading this story is borderline impossible. Nearly every sentence is incoherent, it almost feels like machine translation but this is even harder to understand than a machine translation.
Too many things in this novel are just fucking weird nonsensical bullshit. Phrases like "sakura axe" or "beats". What the fuck is going on here? Is this a naruto x music anime crossover or some shit? I have no idea where these terms come from, they aren't explained in any way and on top of all of this, I can't tell if these terms are a translation error, a side effect of piss poor understanding of the english language or some strange euphemism.
Story reads as if the author is on drugs. It feels like the story needs an english translation for the english translation. I get the feeling that the author has a raging hardon for of all things 'music' and seems to think that their borderline on the spectrum idiosyncrasies make a single lick of sense to the rest of us, which is obviously false.
1/20 c1 lyarqueen
Hello! I hope this message finds you well.
I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I admire your story. The concept is absolutely brilliant, and I’m really curious about what inspired such a unique and captivating idea. What led you to choose these specific characters? They fit so perfectly into the narrative, and it’s clear you have an exceptional talent for creating characters and concepts that truly enhance the story. The way you’ve seamlessly woven the plot and characters together is impressive, and your writing is full of emotional depth and thoughtful development. Your storytelling is both powerful and engaging.
I hope this message brings a smile to your face as I express my appreciation for your remarkable work. A little about me—I’m a professional artist who specializes in transforming stories like yours into beautifully illustrated comics. I’m deeply passionate about my craft, and I would love the opportunity to connect with you on Discord to discuss the possibility of collaborating. It would truly be an honor to work with someone as talented as you.
As I read your story, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing it would look as a webtoon or comic series. I also design e-books and would be thrilled to help bring your story to life visually. Thank you for sharing your extraordinary talent on platforms like Fanfiction—your story deserves to be experienced in exciting new ways, and I’d love to help bring that vision to life through my art.
If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me through any of the following:
Discord: noir_love
Email:
Instagram: luna_love3
Twitter: NoirLovesArts
Thank you again for sharing your incredible work, and I look forward to hearing from you soon!
Hello! I hope this message finds you well.
I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I admire your story. The concept is absolutely brilliant, and I’m really curious about what inspired such a unique and captivating idea. What led you to choose these specific characters? They fit so perfectly into the narrative, and it’s clear you have an exceptional talent for creating characters and concepts that truly enhance the story. The way you’ve seamlessly woven the plot and characters together is impressive, and your writing is full of emotional depth and thoughtful development. Your storytelling is both powerful and engaging.
I hope this message brings a smile to your face as I express my appreciation for your remarkable work. A little about me—I’m a professional artist who specializes in transforming stories like yours into beautifully illustrated comics. I’m deeply passionate about my craft, and I would love the opportunity to connect with you on Discord to discuss the possibility of collaborating. It would truly be an honor to work with someone as talented as you.
As I read your story, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing it would look as a webtoon or comic series. I also design e-books and would be thrilled to help bring your story to life visually. Thank you for sharing your extraordinary talent on platforms like Fanfiction—your story deserves to be experienced in exciting new ways, and I’d love to help bring that vision to life through my art.
If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me through any of the following:
Discord: noir_love
Email:
Instagram: luna_love3
Twitter: NoirLovesArts
Thank you again for sharing your incredible work, and I look forward to hearing from you soon!