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1/11 c3 thedankestyeet
kinda weak you make him so unbothered by killing while in a human body.. even more so since he still kinda questioned things while skeletor, but here? naaaah he'll do the torturing himself.. because you dont want him getting info from the other characters? so youll have him act unlike himself for your goal of solitude in dxd..a little laaaame
1/6 c10 Guest
Will this fsnfic get an update?
1/4 c10 stud2266
Great characterization of Mr. boney man himself (staying in character, does not deviate to his original personality, and most of SANE), great side characters they work well with momonga espcially asia, and the 2 kendo girls, and the way you write people like Rias and her peerage is great! though my only problem with it is chapter count is quite low *hehe

(though if any of the people in the authors community are reading this did. He dropped or axed the story or is he just taking a long hiatus? if you're the author reading if so your writing skills are impeccable and i hope you luck in your writing endeavors:).)
12/12/2023 c4 Guest
Wouldn't that be species-ist?
10/14/2023 c10 VamPyr00
Gotta say, despite the slightly OOC monologues, this was a very good story. Very enjoyable for most Overlord fans, I would assume. Just wish it was longer. Overall, I give it 5 stars.
10/14/2023 c5 VamPyr00
His monologuing is a bit out of control here and frankly is pretty OOC.
10/8/2023 c10 Armatage
This is a great overlord fanfic hopefully we'll see the story progress more in future chapters
9/27/2023 c10 steel.metal14
I eagerly await more.
9/18/2023 c10 Miner49ner
Sex update when?
8/9/2023 c10 GenkaiZero
Always fun to reread :) Thank you :)
It's sad there aren't any more chapters for it on your pat reon though.
7/7/2023 c10 andreevmix111
Such a lot of attention to such a short story, when almost nothing happened and the next author went into the sunset. I'm very upset.
6/17/2023 c4 badboyelsanto
I wish you would at least try to specify whose POV we are reading from when you change the perspective
6/17/2023 c4 badboyelsanto
Too boring and lacks actual dialogue
6/17/2023 c1 badboyelsanto
He could just google search high school close to him? I hate how you’re making momonga seem stupid
6/17/2023 c1 badboyelsanto
Yo, momonga has a skill that prevents him from panicking, it’s kinda strange that you’re making him having a menta breakdown from being in a new world
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