12/1/2019 c1 Guest
Is it just me or is Rias kind of malicious here? I mean, you can say she ensnared Issei in canon, but it would be more naive and spoilt than malicious.

12/1/2019 c1 Guest
He is an Undead Overlord of Death, he should be able to devour the soul of Issei thus gaining every bit of knowledge the moron had possesed. This is a very big plothole in all that Overlord of Death MC possesing the diyng body of that morosei. This would mean that half of the drama and Bs contained in this chapter could be reduced. From what I see in the description of this fanfiction it has no drama tag nor has it the angst that but rather supernatural and adventure and this clearly means that: 1) you mistagged the thing if you are going to include such massive ammounts of drama, angst and bs, or 2) the whole drama and angst bs was simply unshackled by accident.

12/1/2019 c3 Cendric
To MOR the Divine Being, Ainz is building his own new Nazarick in the Hyoudou's basement without his parents noticing and is creating his own undead armies. But I like that Ainz can act like himself and not being forced or not being pressure by his NPCs. Just like the Evileye Spinoff, being himself without Nazarick around to keep them in check.

Also to Student, I agree. Ainz will encounter problems like Issei's changing of personality, but with covert operations and greater luck, he will solve his problems by BS is way out just like he did in the novels. Also I wondered if Ainz realizes already that Kuon Academy is under the controlled by the Devils. It's already been a week that he should have already notice by now.

Also I agree that he is too powerful to be hidden. Then he should create a Momon or Ainz persona in this world. You got a point that Rias is on to him, but if he force Raynare to become his minions. With the Fallen's help, he could stage a false flag or something to confuse the Devils away from him. But let's see what i4md347h can do to resolve this problems.

12/1/2019 c3 3MOR the Divine Being
I know what I'm asking is a bit out of the current plot, but are you planning to include Nazarick in someform in the future? cause seriously your writing is very excellent, and I want to see the Denizen of Nazarick's reaction to Momonga being in a Human body

12/1/2019 c3 Student
Yo! Student here!~ I must say this a different way for Momonga starting his Overlord Route. This Isekai story line is somewhat rare, and only story that compare to this one is Dead Mount Death Play Manga(A god like necromancer that goes isekai to the modern world on another person(Dead)body). Anyway the story sure make Momonga hard to act as the Issei yet he's not, and acting perverted into one is embarrassing as doing his old chunnibyo ways. Now there some problem that Momonga can't fix, not yet in a way. there are three problems.

The first is, he can't continue to hide the fact that he is not Issei. Well i can see some people noticing that Issei not being pervert anymore specially his close h-buddies, and most assume that he change for the better. However the Devils at school will notice this change either they figure out he's not Issei, or another misunderstand that they think due the sacred gear, Well Overlord is full of misunderstand which is funny on the readers point of view.

The Second is, He is too powerful to be hidden. Well like all Isekai, If you have power use it. Due to having his game item, ability and specially his racial trait transfer into Issei posses body, does this still make him as a undead? Well not a lich, but still Undead. Anyway since he still have his game character power, Momonga will start create some thing in his ideals like craving his guild name into a new legend or something like that. Either way those who have great power intend to reshape the world for better or for worst.

The last and Third is, His undecided Role to be. Now Momonga or his IRL name Satoru is reborn in a body of the suppose to be dead "Issei" and given a change to study on junior high school were he haven't got to in his previous life, which usually lead to comrom way were he become a winner in life. However due having all of the items and abilities that his Game Avatar have, this lead him to having two life style like a super heroes or Villains have. Because of that, Satoru won't be living a normal life, and his future is set either he become a dark company Boss that know magic, or to be Sorcerer King like in the novel.

Now the next chapter is surely the turning point what Momonga will do after defeating Raynare? Well I can imagine he will try to live a normal life much as possible. However Rias is on to him and unnecessary conflict might start between the two. Well there part of me wanting to see how he going to make his main base aka Tomb of Nazarick DXD, and recreating it floor guardians. The other wanna see if Momonga can take sacred gears and add to his collection of treasures(man that sound like Gilgamesh Lol!).

Well that all, and keep up the good work~

11/30/2019 c3 2ArmantusCumPinnae
Isnt wish upon a star is something more like a skill or similar to supertier? Ainz used a ring touse it and has a cooldown no? Also why in the hell did he use a supertier equivalent when there is the tier 3 control cloud or tier 4-5 control weather?(if im not mistaken) seems very wasteful. Other than that i look forward to the next chap and papa bones conquest

11/30/2019 c3 Guest
Wish you best of luck for the next chapter

11/30/2019 c1 Guest
This fic is GOLD!