for From Beyond the World Tree9/18/2024 c9 kukuhimanpr
how to make satoru laugh more often... have his math teacher order motoyammers do pro math calculations in class
how to make satoru laugh more often... have his math teacher order motoyammers do pro math calculations in class
9/18/2024 c8 kukuhimanpr
here comes suzuki satoru! with his newest single 'I am a Very Complicated Teenager'!
here comes suzuki satoru! with his newest single 'I am a Very Complicated Teenager'!
9/9/2024 c11 LordOfPhantasm
Mmmm. Honestly, I would love to see a rewrite of this story. It has a lot of potential on its own, and I'm really curious to see what happens next. If I could suggest a change, I’d say it would be great to NOT make his undead summons girly. I really want him to keep Momonga's majesty, even though the whole DxD universe is pushing him toward being a pervert.
Regardless of what others may say, I truly believe you’re an excellent fanfic author. Thank you so much for this wonderful fanfic! I hope you feel inspired to continue it. Good luck!
Mmmm. Honestly, I would love to see a rewrite of this story. It has a lot of potential on its own, and I'm really curious to see what happens next. If I could suggest a change, I’d say it would be great to NOT make his undead summons girly. I really want him to keep Momonga's majesty, even though the whole DxD universe is pushing him toward being a pervert.
Regardless of what others may say, I truly believe you’re an excellent fanfic author. Thank you so much for this wonderful fanfic! I hope you feel inspired to continue it. Good luck!
8/25/2024 c11 knowhere7641
I think a really good crossover of Overlord would be one with Frieren, with a premise of Momonga/Satoru and Keno from the alternate volume coming to that world
I think a really good crossover of Overlord would be one with Frieren, with a premise of Momonga/Satoru and Keno from the alternate volume coming to that world
8/13/2024 c8 guest
HAHAHAHAHA PERVERT SO FUNNY!
HAHAHAHAHA PERVERT SO FUNNY!
8/13/2024 c5 guest
ugh asia is such a pest the mcs always act like faggots around her
ugh asia is such a pest the mcs always act like faggots around her
8/8/2024 c11 anon
It's a shame you lost interest, but seeing a rewrite of this story could be interesting. Personally I think this is one of the better written dxd x overlord crossover fics, so I'm really interested in seeing what you can do after becoming a more proficient writer.
It's a shame you lost interest, but seeing a rewrite of this story could be interesting. Personally I think this is one of the better written dxd x overlord crossover fics, so I'm really interested in seeing what you can do after becoming a more proficient writer.
8/8/2024 c11 forgottenwarriors3
Please continue this fic it you can, it's one of the best in overlord dxd category and if it is a rewrite or another crossover i am waiting for it
Please continue this fic it you can, it's one of the best in overlord dxd category and if it is a rewrite or another crossover i am waiting for it
8/7/2024 c11 Logan
Problems with power scales? Just search for discussions on reddit on the topic, I searched for "ainz vs dxd" and now I know that ainz can solo the verse with pure hax
Problems with power scales? Just search for discussions on reddit on the topic, I searched for "ainz vs dxd" and now I know that ainz can solo the verse with pure hax
8/3/2024 c11 E
I liked this story. There are a small handful of other "Ainz becomes Issei" stories and no others noted the neat fact of Ainz having no stamina due to racial abilities. Lots of small details like that in this that I preferred over others.
In the case of rewrites, I'd hope you'd keep the same basic premise. I enjoyed the interactions with Ophis, felt like the story was really beginning to pick up... And then it died. I am vehemently against some random assortment of OCs. I feel they almost never add anything to the plot and only become necessary when a setting has very few characters, or is so utterly vast in scale that it'd be weird to find important people in the story (like Warhammer 40k, for example). DxD already has plenty of lesser known characters to choose from anyways. If I read correctly that a rewrite would include a bunch of OCs, I'd rather this story just be left as-is, as it was pretty good even while unfinished.
As for other mediums to crossover with? I appreciate stories where Ainz is thrown into a world that really has no contemporary for him. DxD is a great example, as there's enough of an established setting to work with outside of the canon plot, but all of it is utterly alien to Ainz and vice versa. Fate has a long running and (I think) pretty damn good crossover with Overlord already, and I don't think you'll top it. It also has one of the most pedantic and infuriatingly nitpicky fanbases ever. So don't bother with it. I'm not gonna say something like "do something unique, that no one else is doing", but if you're really iching to write for Overlord, maybe aim to fill a niche that is at least not currently already sufficiently filled.
For example, I know there is a singular good Gate crossover with Overlord, but it's just a rarely updated side series to the author's main work. Everything else in the category is either a shitfic written by a 12 year old or utterly rife with original characters to the point of having nothing to do with Overlord. I think there might also be a "Ainz and Nazarick conquer falmart" style fic, but I remember hating it despite being decently written. It was also dead. I think there's a lot of room for a "Ainz shows up and derails canon" style story.
Another example would be Familiar of Zero. There was a really neat mini story on it that looked promising a while ago... then it died. FoZ has an utterly mid and uninteresting canon story, but is a fairly consistent and well written setting to introduce other stuff to.
All in all, if you're gonna start a new crossover, I vote for something not a lot of other people are working on. I would definitely read more of this, though.
I await more, as always.
I liked this story. There are a small handful of other "Ainz becomes Issei" stories and no others noted the neat fact of Ainz having no stamina due to racial abilities. Lots of small details like that in this that I preferred over others.
In the case of rewrites, I'd hope you'd keep the same basic premise. I enjoyed the interactions with Ophis, felt like the story was really beginning to pick up... And then it died. I am vehemently against some random assortment of OCs. I feel they almost never add anything to the plot and only become necessary when a setting has very few characters, or is so utterly vast in scale that it'd be weird to find important people in the story (like Warhammer 40k, for example). DxD already has plenty of lesser known characters to choose from anyways. If I read correctly that a rewrite would include a bunch of OCs, I'd rather this story just be left as-is, as it was pretty good even while unfinished.
As for other mediums to crossover with? I appreciate stories where Ainz is thrown into a world that really has no contemporary for him. DxD is a great example, as there's enough of an established setting to work with outside of the canon plot, but all of it is utterly alien to Ainz and vice versa. Fate has a long running and (I think) pretty damn good crossover with Overlord already, and I don't think you'll top it. It also has one of the most pedantic and infuriatingly nitpicky fanbases ever. So don't bother with it. I'm not gonna say something like "do something unique, that no one else is doing", but if you're really iching to write for Overlord, maybe aim to fill a niche that is at least not currently already sufficiently filled.
For example, I know there is a singular good Gate crossover with Overlord, but it's just a rarely updated side series to the author's main work. Everything else in the category is either a shitfic written by a 12 year old or utterly rife with original characters to the point of having nothing to do with Overlord. I think there might also be a "Ainz and Nazarick conquer falmart" style fic, but I remember hating it despite being decently written. It was also dead. I think there's a lot of room for a "Ainz shows up and derails canon" style story.
Another example would be Familiar of Zero. There was a really neat mini story on it that looked promising a while ago... then it died. FoZ has an utterly mid and uninteresting canon story, but is a fairly consistent and well written setting to introduce other stuff to.
All in all, if you're gonna start a new crossover, I vote for something not a lot of other people are working on. I would definitely read more of this, though.
I await more, as always.
8/3/2024 c1 Maheshvara10
this is really good story. In my opinion you should continue this awesome work. but this is your work. you can do whatever you like.
this is really good story. In my opinion you should continue this awesome work. but this is your work. you can do whatever you like.
8/2/2024 c1 SMB
Why the f**k didn't his parents see all the blood on his f**king clothes? He had to wring out his f**king sweater there was so much and it was all over his hands! HOW THE F**K DIDN'T THEY NOTICE?
Why the f**k didn't his parents see all the blood on his f**king clothes? He had to wring out his f**king sweater there was so much and it was all over his hands! HOW THE F**K DIDN'T THEY NOTICE?