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11/22/2019 c1 5Gaara'sGoddess
This is sweet.
11/21/2019 c1 tanuki
This is beautiful. If there's more story to tell and it interests you enough I say write more. :)
11/21/2019 c1 Nanami
Thanks for wite, I love this cuople.

11/21/2019 c1 Constantinest
This story actually have a nice idea maybe to simple but maybe we can have another chapter someday :) about how they relationship works..

And for the word if better to " than - it make to hard for read...

Ex : "Hello Sakura," this one is better than -Hello Sakura-
Enough from me :D
Keep writing
11/22/2019 c1 10Hyuuga Tenten n.n
I could read this for hours! Please go on, it has so much potential!

ps: i didn't even realize english was not your first language. Good work!
11/21/2019 c1 shaswat
Hey, your article was just wonderful! If you don't mind why don't you submit this on my Medium publication. Link: /swapeer

It would mean a lot to me! Have fun!

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