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8/28 c7 2jacke44
hope to see a new ch soon
6/13 c7 Borello
the story is good and really interesting. i hope to read more chapter.
5/19 c1 Turboranger
And don't you motherfucking bloody asshooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooole forget about lucifuge dragon
5/7 c7 1mikatamo
I like your story but if I have to say that the harem you plan to do is too big, you need to low that number down so that can be easy to hand while writing, or not soon or later you will get writers' block and the story becomes bad and not good as now
5/1 c7 Haruka Azuno
Please Update soon?
2/11 c7 Blackholelord
So the harem. I have to say that this is rather big. More love and all that, and Naruto does need love, but I have seen similar ideas and they tend to implode as writers tend to begin struggling to have all the girls interact in the story without sounding like Mary Sues, other times plain forget about them until a reader brings it up. I rather like your story, and hope it continues to the end. This big can be a killer, before you consider this idea, think how are you going to get all the girls to interact in something this massive, but the only way I can see is if the girls are not all in town at once, allowing their interaction be more controlled.
2/11 c7 1R-king 93
Awesome chapter
2/10 c7 Shadow
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
2/11 c7 tiger9868
please update
2/10 c7 Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1
So freaking awesome!
MAKE MORE!
2/10 c7 18Hotstreak's crossover stories
Amazing
2/10 c7 demon87
very super
2/10 c7 12HyperA2019
I am looking fowards to Chapter 8 and it be interesting Naruto meet former members of Teen Titans.
2/9 c7 SPark681
Hmm, a nice chapter seems Naruto has more girls interested in him anyways keep up the great work!
2/9 c3 1monsterkillers124
also reflection was another words misspelled as well
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