for That Was Part of the Plan11/15/2024 c90 alpharos.89
Fyi: the story is being updated in AO3 it already has six more chapters although it was last updated in march
Fyi: the story is being updated in AO3 it already has six more chapters although it was last updated in march
8/2/2024 c90 maiqsmail
"Last updated note than 2 years ago".
Oh, brother...
Well, it was a fun story and worth it even unfinished, but it dragged too much in a lot of places. Which, honestly, I wouldn't really mind too much if it was finished, but instead it looks like the authors burnt out trying to cover the whole story at this level of detail and now we don't have an ending. Or even the hint of an ending. So many plots are not even unfinished, but have no hint how they would finish. Like, will Voldi even abduct Harry and return? What will be his play without his DEs? And by that time it's possible the Civil war would break out and/or the Veil will be Lifted (broken Statute of Secrecy) so what will be the stance of all major players in those circumstances?
And, as I predicted, we don't even get into Yule ball in the plot in this pace! Ugh.
Great story, though, following awaiting a miracle.
"Last updated note than 2 years ago".
Oh, brother...
Well, it was a fun story and worth it even unfinished, but it dragged too much in a lot of places. Which, honestly, I wouldn't really mind too much if it was finished, but instead it looks like the authors burnt out trying to cover the whole story at this level of detail and now we don't have an ending. Or even the hint of an ending. So many plots are not even unfinished, but have no hint how they would finish. Like, will Voldi even abduct Harry and return? What will be his play without his DEs? And by that time it's possible the Civil war would break out and/or the Veil will be Lifted (broken Statute of Secrecy) so what will be the stance of all major players in those circumstances?
And, as I predicted, we don't even get into Yule ball in the plot in this pace! Ugh.
Great story, though, following awaiting a miracle.
7/31/2024 c79 maiqsmail
Wow, the security here is even worth than at the World Cup. Most of the enforcers left before the Task and heavy hitters are incapacitated by being magically bound to sit and judge the task instead of putting fires around them. What a clasterfuck.
Wow, the security here is even worth than at the World Cup. Most of the enforcers left before the Task and heavy hitters are incapacitated by being magically bound to sit and judge the task instead of putting fires around them. What a clasterfuck.
7/30/2024 c65 maiqsmail
It's been however the fuck many chapters covering just the 1st task of 3wt and we're still only half way through it. Will fic cut off *before* the Yule ball at this pace? Holy fuck, that's a lot of details from numerous POVs, very ambitious.
It's been however the fuck many chapters covering just the 1st task of 3wt and we're still only half way through it. Will fic cut off *before* the Yule ball at this pace? Holy fuck, that's a lot of details from numerous POVs, very ambitious.
7/27/2024 c37 maiqsmail
Ahahah, you have pages of inner monologue in one place and then your whole sex scene is just a one liner "fade to black". What gives?
Ahahah, you have pages of inner monologue in one place and then your whole sex scene is just a one liner "fade to black". What gives?
7/26/2024 c33 maiqsmail
Please don't go into real life politics in author's note. Also, I support JKR.
Please don't go into real life politics in author's note. Also, I support JKR.
7/26/2024 c28 maiqsmail
This is the most brilliantly insane "selection of champions at 3wt" scene ever. Barefoot Sirius was a nice touch.
This is the most brilliantly insane "selection of champions at 3wt" scene ever. Barefoot Sirius was a nice touch.
7/25/2024 c18 maiqsmail
Bloody brilliant and effective strategy, just put all Marked under the Unbreakable bow not to actively serve Riddle and call it a day. How come I haven't seen it in other stories?!
Bloody brilliant and effective strategy, just put all Marked under the Unbreakable bow not to actively serve Riddle and call it a day. How come I haven't seen it in other stories?!
7/24/2024 c14 maiqsmail
Finally! Luna was rededicated! I want more screen time for Luna speaking The Truth! And being a friend of Lyra again!
Finally! Luna was rededicated! I want more screen time for Luna speaking The Truth! And being a friend of Lyra again!
9/8/2023 c90 Gazuzin
Grrrreat fic, makes the wizarding World make sense, even after reading a lot of fics before, stuff like who's related to who, and the mix of muggle and magical stuff
Grrrreat fic, makes the wizarding World make sense, even after reading a lot of fics before, stuff like who's related to who, and the mix of muggle and magical stuff
8/29/2023 c85 Guest
Hermione is portrayed very badly. You just feel like kicking her hard repeatedly - an absolutely wretched Hippocratic selfish bint feeling entitled and encroaching on others rights
Hermione is portrayed very badly. You just feel like kicking her hard repeatedly - an absolutely wretched Hippocratic selfish bint feeling entitled and encroaching on others rights
8/7/2023 c90 ErnestTheGuy
Sad to see this on hiatus? Abandoned? I love the depth of history you two have made for this. The world feels so real. I'm going to read everything else you two have made now
Sad to see this on hiatus? Abandoned? I love the depth of history you two have made for this. The world feels so real. I'm going to read everything else you two have made now
5/13/2023 c49 dveth
This chapter is terrible. The fact that Lovegood is blatantly manipulating the public to change the rules at the last second, despite everyone having agreed on them before, should have gotten her censured or disqualified as a judge. Instead, everyone just goes along with it and gives her exactly what she wants. Not only that, Angel is told compromise is part of being a diplomat. What part of giving a blatant cheat exactly what they want is a compromise?
And if the judges are going to go along with the blatant bias going on, then Durmstrang and Beauxbatons should have just public said everyone single one of their people were going to use lethal force on the Hogwarts group. It might have gotten them disqualified from the Task after the rule change, but it would have increased their schools' chances of winning since the Hogwarts champions would be dead for the rest of the tournament.
It's one thing to have a character do something that proves they're untrustworthy. It's another for everyone else involved to just go along with their actions and give them what they want despite them proving to be a terrible, biased judge.
This chapter is terrible. The fact that Lovegood is blatantly manipulating the public to change the rules at the last second, despite everyone having agreed on them before, should have gotten her censured or disqualified as a judge. Instead, everyone just goes along with it and gives her exactly what she wants. Not only that, Angel is told compromise is part of being a diplomat. What part of giving a blatant cheat exactly what they want is a compromise?
And if the judges are going to go along with the blatant bias going on, then Durmstrang and Beauxbatons should have just public said everyone single one of their people were going to use lethal force on the Hogwarts group. It might have gotten them disqualified from the Task after the rule change, but it would have increased their schools' chances of winning since the Hogwarts champions would be dead for the rest of the tournament.
It's one thing to have a character do something that proves they're untrustworthy. It's another for everyone else involved to just go along with their actions and give them what they want despite them proving to be a terrible, biased judge.
1/6/2023 c1 abuduu
is this dead?
is this dead?