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1Yamajiji
Wow. So he actually didn’t lose his powers here? I liked how you explained it, and I imagine it was his Quincy side which was draining Isshin. Now he’s gonna be pissed at Soul Society after finding out they were spying on him, since he wont be grateful they gave him back his powers.
1YamajijiWow. So he actually didn’t lose his powers here? I liked how you explained it, and I imagine it was his Quincy side which was draining Isshin. Now he’s gonna be pissed at Soul Society after finding out they were spying on him, since he wont be grateful they gave him back his powers.
9/6/2020 c66 Guy
Thanks for clearing some stuff. I have completely forgotten that Ichigo was still in high school in the early parts of bleach and some parts of the fic that you already addressed. The thing with what I said about Orihime, I didn't mean it like they were gonna rescue her, I meant like they beat the espadas or rescue Ichigo, whichever was their priority, and she's secondary rescue/elimination target. Oops, didn't phrase it right. Also haven't seen bleach for a long while.
True soul society could've avoided the nonsense but I still think they were right to keep it a secret and they really shouldn't have held him back when Aizen became a threat. They could have told him after Aizen what the badge was really for since Ichigo, as you've stated, acts recklessly.
I had no problems with you killing Orihime just your interpretation of her circumstance. Only other thing I'm bothered with is why did you make the captain's meeting for Ginjo like that, but since you've already explained it I'm good.
Thanks for clearing some stuff. I have completely forgotten that Ichigo was still in high school in the early parts of bleach and some parts of the fic that you already addressed. The thing with what I said about Orihime, I didn't mean it like they were gonna rescue her, I meant like they beat the espadas or rescue Ichigo, whichever was their priority, and she's secondary rescue/elimination target. Oops, didn't phrase it right. Also haven't seen bleach for a long while.
True soul society could've avoided the nonsense but I still think they were right to keep it a secret and they really shouldn't have held him back when Aizen became a threat. They could have told him after Aizen what the badge was really for since Ichigo, as you've stated, acts recklessly.
I had no problems with you killing Orihime just your interpretation of her circumstance. Only other thing I'm bothered with is why did you make the captain's meeting for Ginjo like that, but since you've already explained it I'm good.
9/5/2020 c65 Guy
Oops I half-assed this sentence. Let me correct it.
Kisuke and Isshin knew what was going on and decided to be extremely vague to Ichigo about it when they should've been honest about it. It could've saved Ichigo a lot of trouble and prevent him from dying multiple times. They would give Ichigo some trust issues. And Aizen don't get me started on him, you'd really trust someone whose entire thing is illusions and I'm not talking about his zanpaktou.
Oops I half-assed this sentence. Let me correct it.
Kisuke and Isshin knew what was going on and decided to be extremely vague to Ichigo about it when they should've been honest about it. It could've saved Ichigo a lot of trouble and prevent him from dying multiple times. They would give Ichigo some trust issues. And Aizen don't get me started on him, you'd really trust someone whose entire thing is illusions and I'm not talking about his zanpaktou.
9/5/2020 c65 Guy
Same person here. I forgot to mention that before rescuing Orihime, the captains were fighting the espadas. They needed to get healed fast and the target was basically secured until Starkk took her. Most of the espadas were defeated and Aizen had brought the best of them to invade karakura town.
People Ichigo should not trust:
Isshin
Kisuke and his crew
Aizen
Kisuke and Isshin knew what was going on and decided to be extremely vague to Ichigo about it when they should've been honest about it should give Ichigo some trust issues.
Not trustworthy but can work with professionally:
Entire 13 Court Guard Squads
Their the guardians of the after life with a primitive way of enforcing the law. Sure not having retirement is one thing since they live a long life and no one's got time to save that much or that much to do at all with that lifespan, it's another to just not questions the events what made traditionalist go out of character (Rukia's execution). At the very least they can work with Ichigo well.
Wild Cards:
Vizards
A bunch of soul reapers who rivals that of captains and being charitable with Ichigo and his hollow and no other motives other than that? Suspicious. They are an unknown factor that could go in so many different directions.
Unknown:
Uryu Ishida
Historical reasons and he flat out said that he does not like soul reapers. What other reasons are there? Ichigo is a human that has been turned soul reaper, I doubt Uryu would truly see him as an enemy unless he fully sides with them. But this Uryu I am referring to is early in bleach.
Potential development wasted:
Orihime
She could've trained with the Vizards instead since Hachi said her powers were similar to his. She'd be in a position of safety and would not get kidnapped. True her kidnapped would've been avoidable if she just trained with the vizards but you're also forgetting that Orihime can barely defend herself against a lieutenant level fighter let alone an espada. She basically had no other choice other and she didn't know the espadas and captains that well as Ichigo. She also was not raised as a warrior nor did she had the kind of mentors that you presented Ichigo to have. She's basically a civilian that got caught in the crossfire.
Same person here. I forgot to mention that before rescuing Orihime, the captains were fighting the espadas. They needed to get healed fast and the target was basically secured until Starkk took her. Most of the espadas were defeated and Aizen had brought the best of them to invade karakura town.
People Ichigo should not trust:
Isshin
Kisuke and his crew
Aizen
Kisuke and Isshin knew what was going on and decided to be extremely vague to Ichigo about it when they should've been honest about it should give Ichigo some trust issues.
Not trustworthy but can work with professionally:
Entire 13 Court Guard Squads
Their the guardians of the after life with a primitive way of enforcing the law. Sure not having retirement is one thing since they live a long life and no one's got time to save that much or that much to do at all with that lifespan, it's another to just not questions the events what made traditionalist go out of character (Rukia's execution). At the very least they can work with Ichigo well.
Wild Cards:
Vizards
A bunch of soul reapers who rivals that of captains and being charitable with Ichigo and his hollow and no other motives other than that? Suspicious. They are an unknown factor that could go in so many different directions.
Unknown:
Uryu Ishida
Historical reasons and he flat out said that he does not like soul reapers. What other reasons are there? Ichigo is a human that has been turned soul reaper, I doubt Uryu would truly see him as an enemy unless he fully sides with them. But this Uryu I am referring to is early in bleach.
Potential development wasted:
Orihime
She could've trained with the Vizards instead since Hachi said her powers were similar to his. She'd be in a position of safety and would not get kidnapped. True her kidnapped would've been avoidable if she just trained with the vizards but you're also forgetting that Orihime can barely defend herself against a lieutenant level fighter let alone an espada. She basically had no other choice other and she didn't know the espadas and captains that well as Ichigo. She also was not raised as a warrior nor did she had the kind of mentors that you presented Ichigo to have. She's basically a civilian that got caught in the crossfire.
9/3/2020 c65 Guy
As interesting as this is, I believe bleach is more of a philosophical anime can what your trying to interpret.
To be fair with the substitute soul reaper thing, Ichigo was a wild card and they had to know if he's an enemy or not especially when he has the power to rival captains. It's not like soul society had a captain betrayed them right? The thing about limiting his spirit energy may be the same as the gentei kaijo thing. The spirit energies influence the world and they would want to limit it. Too bad for them Ichigo had no training in controlling his power. Any plans to kill Ichigo was only after he regained his soul reaper powers. So even if they killed Ginjo before Ichigo got his Fullbring stolen, they would apologize and tell them the history of substitute soul reapers and why they were wary of them. Remember, when he regained his powers he had the power to rival captains again. What sort of morons would allow a powerful being to go around unchecked especially when they are an organization meant to protect the living? The thing with Orihime in Hueco Mundo is that it was not even necessary to kill her. It was because her healing rivals that of Unohana. She is valuable. If she were to be put in a spot where she would be a threat I can see that, but the soul reapers would want to secure her to aid their cause.
Basically you made Ichigo and his hollow just jump to conclusions. It is a fair assumption but still jumping to conclusions. Soul society would rather leave Ichigo alone rather kill him for being manipulated by their enemy. You just made them unnecessary assholes.
I've read another fanfic, not as good as this, was a more mature Ichigo not judging their way cause he knows he is ignorant and would still do the same thing because his friends were in danger.
This is still a good fanfic with a lot of good development but it feels more like a rant than anything.
7/10
As interesting as this is, I believe bleach is more of a philosophical anime can what your trying to interpret.
To be fair with the substitute soul reaper thing, Ichigo was a wild card and they had to know if he's an enemy or not especially when he has the power to rival captains. It's not like soul society had a captain betrayed them right? The thing about limiting his spirit energy may be the same as the gentei kaijo thing. The spirit energies influence the world and they would want to limit it. Too bad for them Ichigo had no training in controlling his power. Any plans to kill Ichigo was only after he regained his soul reaper powers. So even if they killed Ginjo before Ichigo got his Fullbring stolen, they would apologize and tell them the history of substitute soul reapers and why they were wary of them. Remember, when he regained his powers he had the power to rival captains again. What sort of morons would allow a powerful being to go around unchecked especially when they are an organization meant to protect the living? The thing with Orihime in Hueco Mundo is that it was not even necessary to kill her. It was because her healing rivals that of Unohana. She is valuable. If she were to be put in a spot where she would be a threat I can see that, but the soul reapers would want to secure her to aid their cause.
Basically you made Ichigo and his hollow just jump to conclusions. It is a fair assumption but still jumping to conclusions. Soul society would rather leave Ichigo alone rather kill him for being manipulated by their enemy. You just made them unnecessary assholes.
I've read another fanfic, not as good as this, was a more mature Ichigo not judging their way cause he knows he is ignorant and would still do the same thing because his friends were in danger.
This is still a good fanfic with a lot of good development but it feels more like a rant than anything.
7/10
8/24/2020 c32 HAEVs Sha
Hmm.. I think zangetsu and white manipulate ichigo to be selfish and cut all tie with everyone.. So they are like an antihero or something.. They mean well but their way is wrong.. In the end, they are bad
Hmm.. I think zangetsu and white manipulate ichigo to be selfish and cut all tie with everyone.. So they are like an antihero or something.. They mean well but their way is wrong.. In the end, they are bad
8/15/2020 c61 Yugi Uzumaki and Naruto Moto
I found this story today and just as I got to chapter 60 I was a little sad as I didn’t know when this would be updated next but when got to the bottom of chapter 60 I found there was one more I was so excited this is such a good story and I can’t wait for the next update. I wish I had found this story earlier.
I found this story today and just as I got to chapter 60 I was a little sad as I didn’t know when this would be updated next but when got to the bottom of chapter 60 I found there was one more I was so excited this is such a good story and I can’t wait for the next update. I wish I had found this story earlier.
8/12/2020 c60 Petrox
I don't understand. If a human die do they not leave the body and become an spirit waiting for konso? If a spirit kills you, it kills their soul too bypassing the body? They die and go straight to rukongai? I hope you don't extend too much the fight scenes. I'm not a fan of those with non cannon characters (fillers aren't cannon) and I would get tired reading them fight.
I don't understand. If a human die do they not leave the body and become an spirit waiting for konso? If a spirit kills you, it kills their soul too bypassing the body? They die and go straight to rukongai? I hope you don't extend too much the fight scenes. I'm not a fan of those with non cannon characters (fillers aren't cannon) and I would get tired reading them fight.
8/12/2020 c60 27zeynel
Nice new part !
I get why yu killed Chad -there needs to be loss if this is a war and Chad, while havin potential, does not have lots of experience and trainings.
Ichigo not going to the burial is understandable, they're not just in the middle of a war, they're in the middle of a battle. If it had been finished with the burial arranged a few days later with the certitude of no other battle for a month... Yeah, then he could have spare a couple of hours. Here ? It's a distraction and a luxury they can't afford. By the way, I like that Uraraka instructed him to go to sleep and let the battle to them when he came back. More realistical.
27zeynelNice new part !
I get why yu killed Chad -there needs to be loss if this is a war and Chad, while havin potential, does not have lots of experience and trainings.
Ichigo not going to the burial is understandable, they're not just in the middle of a war, they're in the middle of a battle. If it had been finished with the burial arranged a few days later with the certitude of no other battle for a month... Yeah, then he could have spare a couple of hours. Here ? It's a distraction and a luxury they can't afford. By the way, I like that Uraraka instructed him to go to sleep and let the battle to them when he came back. More realistical.
8/7/2020 c59 uchihaNaruto247
That’s tuff orihimes dead, her healing is very clutch, I don’t know who’s alive at the moment who can heal patients better than her.
That’s tuff orihimes dead, her healing is very clutch, I don’t know who’s alive at the moment who can heal patients better than her.
8/7/2020 c59 777torn777
Since no one prioritized her safety normally it’s not a surprise. She’s a walking senzu bean and no one seems to care.
Since no one prioritized her safety normally it’s not a surprise. She’s a walking senzu bean and no one seems to care.
8/7/2020 c59 Guest
You just did the greatest thing by removing the bloodly annoyance out of story thanks a thousand times
You just did the greatest thing by removing the bloodly annoyance out of story thanks a thousand times