for Not a Little Boy Anymore1/10 c3 darthkratos24
Meh story isn't the worst I've read but it needs a lot of work feels forced, rushed and has no structure at all just jumping from one place to the next without telling the reader and it's hellishly jaring to read.
Meh story isn't the worst I've read but it needs a lot of work feels forced, rushed and has no structure at all just jumping from one place to the next without telling the reader and it's hellishly jaring to read.
7/26/2021 c5 K
Enjoyable so far.
Author Reply: Thanks for taking the time to read it and review it. I am glad you are liking it so far.
Enjoyable so far.
Author Reply: Thanks for taking the time to read it and review it. I am glad you are liking it so far.
5/19/2021 c3 guest
Boring unnecessary forced drama. Good thing this was dropped
Author’s reply: Thank you for reading as much of this story as you did and taking the time to review. Sorry the story wasn’t to your liking. But no, I have not ‘dropped’ this story.
Boring unnecessary forced drama. Good thing this was dropped
Author’s reply: Thank you for reading as much of this story as you did and taking the time to review. Sorry the story wasn’t to your liking. But no, I have not ‘dropped’ this story.
6/6/2020 c5 Ariadne Venegas
Yay! There is photos anymore!
I wonder about the dream... if the printing press was destroyed then They did it in a shared dream?
Yay! There is photos anymore!
I wonder about the dream... if the printing press was destroyed then They did it in a shared dream?
6/6/2020 c5 
7csg-III
Great chapter.
Really funny, I loved it and laughed out loud many times while I was reading this one.
Loved Gabrielle's little prank there with the dream. I can see why Harry thought it was the best dream ever. Interesting scenario for the dream, the printing press. I guess Fleur's worries about the pictures took them there, because it wouldn't be the most romantic place to pick. The love making in synch with the glowing-desintegration effect was amazingly written, showed the dream atmosphere very well and also the intensity of the love making as the climax destroyed the whole building.
Loved the Drapple wedding prank, very funny and a brilliant idea.
Wow, Bozo has a collection of pictures - and even one of Rita! I wonder if he's just a pervy who can't control himself or if he actually has a crush on the boss. The tables were turned when Bozo was the one photographed in a compromising position hehehe
Glad that Harry and Fleur found the stash and burned it down.
Looking forward to seeing what's next!
7csg-IIIGreat chapter.
Really funny, I loved it and laughed out loud many times while I was reading this one.
Loved Gabrielle's little prank there with the dream. I can see why Harry thought it was the best dream ever. Interesting scenario for the dream, the printing press. I guess Fleur's worries about the pictures took them there, because it wouldn't be the most romantic place to pick. The love making in synch with the glowing-desintegration effect was amazingly written, showed the dream atmosphere very well and also the intensity of the love making as the climax destroyed the whole building.
Loved the Drapple wedding prank, very funny and a brilliant idea.
Wow, Bozo has a collection of pictures - and even one of Rita! I wonder if he's just a pervy who can't control himself or if he actually has a crush on the boss. The tables were turned when Bozo was the one photographed in a compromising position hehehe
Glad that Harry and Fleur found the stash and burned it down.
Looking forward to seeing what's next!
6/6/2020 c5 Brockster550
Bozo got caught in the act of his pleasure. I doubt he'll be hearing the ens of it. Theo pronouncing Draco and his green apple as a married couple was pretty funny. The comments about people feeling sorry for the apple getting thrown and Pansy getting jealous of the apple marrying Draco made it funnier. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!
Bozo got caught in the act of his pleasure. I doubt he'll be hearing the ens of it. Theo pronouncing Draco and his green apple as a married couple was pretty funny. The comments about people feeling sorry for the apple getting thrown and Pansy getting jealous of the apple marrying Draco made it funnier. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!
6/6/2020 c5 4Chaos Snow Kitsune
Hurray! Another chapter! Malfoy getting ridiculed is always a treat. Hope to see more of this
4Chaos Snow KitsuneHurray! Another chapter! Malfoy getting ridiculed is always a treat. Hope to see more of this
5/5/2020 c4 Phoenix1137
I'm really liking your writing and this story.
One thing in this chapter that is bugging me a little is the formatting of the article at the end. It is hard to tell where the article ends and the reactions begin. I would like to see the article italicised or something similar to differentiate it from the rest of the story.
But other than that, keep up the good work.
I'm really liking your writing and this story.
One thing in this chapter that is bugging me a little is the formatting of the article at the end. It is hard to tell where the article ends and the reactions begin. I would like to see the article italicised or something similar to differentiate it from the rest of the story.
But other than that, keep up the good work.