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1/5 c1 3TheWizardofOzbourne
Wow, that was a gut punch. Nicely done.
6/25/2020 c1 22jerseydanielgibson
I can't tell if Sarah has completely broken down to psychosis or if she's delusional now, but this is an awfully endearing piece that just touches the hopes and struggles of someone who lives in a very real fractured reality that we would all deem insane since she kinda blew up all the proof. I'm not even sure if she's actually sitting in a park or if shit's messed up and she's just fabricating better times. Oddly enough, I think that's the best part of this piece; a haunted woman reminiscing on better times.
12/3/2019 c1 darthmatthew
Wow, I really enjoyed this.

I particularly liked the way you did the twist.
12/1/2019 c1 12supercode
Wow. Very sad and dark. It would be sort of ironic if, after all that effort stopping A.I, humanity destroys itself anyway. Just like an A.I predicted.

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