for Checkmate4/23 c1 junaid2107
One of the better fanfics out there. Hikio-Yumiko interactions are fun, she would make a better love triangle than Yui since there is actual chemistry, i like Yukino being challenged, it brings the best out of her although i don't want her to turn psycho coz thats very OOC.
Also it is a bit far fetched that Yumiko suddenly gets over Hayama after 2 years of pining and instantly falls for Hikio in 1 week, same for 8man since he is very cynical he would not just start having feelings in for a girl 2 weeks, even with Yukino it took so many months .yea its fanfic but some time skips and some small summary of their growth could have been plausible.
One of the better fanfics out there. Hikio-Yumiko interactions are fun, she would make a better love triangle than Yui since there is actual chemistry, i like Yukino being challenged, it brings the best out of her although i don't want her to turn psycho coz thats very OOC.
Also it is a bit far fetched that Yumiko suddenly gets over Hayama after 2 years of pining and instantly falls for Hikio in 1 week, same for 8man since he is very cynical he would not just start having feelings in for a girl 2 weeks, even with Yukino it took so many months .yea its fanfic but some time skips and some small summary of their growth could have been plausible.
3/16 c16 Avid fan
Please update
Please update
3/16 c9 Gilgamesh50
Yumiko taking more spotlight than yukino and idk how to feel about that ngl
Not that i dislike yumiko but i wanted to see more yukino x hikigaya
Yumiko taking more spotlight than yukino and idk how to feel about that ngl
Not that i dislike yumiko but i wanted to see more yukino x hikigaya
2/24 c16 NB132
This is fucking alive and I found out late!? Travesty on my part, thanks for writing it.
This is fucking alive and I found out late!? Travesty on my part, thanks for writing it.
2/22 c16 wardak
I finally had the balls to finish the last 2 chapters. This was certainly fun to read, the rivalry between Yukino and Miura was really enjoyable. They both are out for each others head and Yukino's brief snap at Haruno did show how intense their rivalry was. Haruno is also quite annoying, but I guess that's just her character and what she serves as in the story. I can't wait to see what Hayato's and Yuigahama's reaction is to Yukino and Miura giving Hachiman their chocolate, basically confessing their love for him. I like the added bit of tomfoolery going on between Hiratsuka and Hachiman, and how Miura is mistaking their relationship (unless its like that?) I seriously can not wait for the next chapter, and I really hope you update soon. I hope school is going well for you, and that you have time to continue writing this lol. Anyways, AMAZING chapter, and I can not wait to see how the next chapter will play out, especially since both of the Queens have made their move.
I finally had the balls to finish the last 2 chapters. This was certainly fun to read, the rivalry between Yukino and Miura was really enjoyable. They both are out for each others head and Yukino's brief snap at Haruno did show how intense their rivalry was. Haruno is also quite annoying, but I guess that's just her character and what she serves as in the story. I can't wait to see what Hayato's and Yuigahama's reaction is to Yukino and Miura giving Hachiman their chocolate, basically confessing their love for him. I like the added bit of tomfoolery going on between Hiratsuka and Hachiman, and how Miura is mistaking their relationship (unless its like that?) I seriously can not wait for the next chapter, and I really hope you update soon. I hope school is going well for you, and that you have time to continue writing this lol. Anyways, AMAZING chapter, and I can not wait to see how the next chapter will play out, especially since both of the Queens have made their move.
2/3 c14 wardak
I just finished chapter 13, you have an amazing story on your hands. I do see every now and then that you have some grammatical errors, but they never impede on what the story is trying to convey. I really can not wait to see how this confession race ends up playing out, I feel like both Miura and Yukino are on somewhat equal footing, if not Yukino is only slighter farther ahead due to Hachiman realizing his feelings for her quite early on compared to Miura. Its also nice to see Hachiman accepting their help, as it opens the door for more heartfelt talks later down the line. I do wonder if you have any ideas on expanding any other romantic interests, especially Yui as I can't help but feel like shes been sort of sidelined (which makes sense narrative wise since you intend to make Yukino and Miura the main leads.) This whole fanfic so far has been a blast to read, and I kind of don't want to keep reading it because I don't want it to end. From what I've heard in the reviews, it seems like you took a long break before posting the most recent chapter, and it may sound selfish but I don't want to finish this fanfic and have wait months for another chapter (although, please take your time when writing, a well thought-out chapter is better than a rushed one) Anyways, I look forward to the rest of this fanfic, and let me say that you are truly an amazing author!
I just finished chapter 13, you have an amazing story on your hands. I do see every now and then that you have some grammatical errors, but they never impede on what the story is trying to convey. I really can not wait to see how this confession race ends up playing out, I feel like both Miura and Yukino are on somewhat equal footing, if not Yukino is only slighter farther ahead due to Hachiman realizing his feelings for her quite early on compared to Miura. Its also nice to see Hachiman accepting their help, as it opens the door for more heartfelt talks later down the line. I do wonder if you have any ideas on expanding any other romantic interests, especially Yui as I can't help but feel like shes been sort of sidelined (which makes sense narrative wise since you intend to make Yukino and Miura the main leads.) This whole fanfic so far has been a blast to read, and I kind of don't want to keep reading it because I don't want it to end. From what I've heard in the reviews, it seems like you took a long break before posting the most recent chapter, and it may sound selfish but I don't want to finish this fanfic and have wait months for another chapter (although, please take your time when writing, a well thought-out chapter is better than a rushed one) Anyways, I look forward to the rest of this fanfic, and let me say that you are truly an amazing author!
1/29 c9 wardak
Wow, currently on chapter 8, and let me tell you that you might be one of the best writers in the Oregairu space. You are a master at writing interactions and making connections seem actually plausible. Most writers sort of just force their headcannons and desires into their fanfic without actually trying to make it work, and the ones that do try to make it work aren't always the best at writing it. However, you are amazing at writing genuine human interaction and this really helps each relationship seem a lot more real. Anyways amazing job, and I look forward to the rest of the chapters!
Wow, currently on chapter 8, and let me tell you that you might be one of the best writers in the Oregairu space. You are a master at writing interactions and making connections seem actually plausible. Most writers sort of just force their headcannons and desires into their fanfic without actually trying to make it work, and the ones that do try to make it work aren't always the best at writing it. However, you are amazing at writing genuine human interaction and this really helps each relationship seem a lot more real. Anyways amazing job, and I look forward to the rest of the chapters!
1/27 c4 wardak
I am currently on chapter 3, and let me say this is one of the best written oregairu fanfics on this website. Most of these fanfics are just harems or ruthlessly butcher hachimans or somebody elses character to fit the story, but I feel like this one doesn't. I've also always been intrigued by any fanfics surrounding Miura's character, as I feel like she would be someone interesting to delve deeper into. I can tell this story has a lot of potential, and I can't wait to see what the next chapters are like!
I am currently on chapter 3, and let me say this is one of the best written oregairu fanfics on this website. Most of these fanfics are just harems or ruthlessly butcher hachimans or somebody elses character to fit the story, but I feel like this one doesn't. I've also always been intrigued by any fanfics surrounding Miura's character, as I feel like she would be someone interesting to delve deeper into. I can tell this story has a lot of potential, and I can't wait to see what the next chapters are like!
1/16 c16 
10Toshiro Ricky
the moment of trut! but you evilly has a gut to gave us cliffhanger.
This story is like made for two best popular oregairu fanfic girls. Yukino and Yumiko.
10Toshiro Rickythe moment of trut! but you evilly has a gut to gave us cliffhanger.
This story is like made for two best popular oregairu fanfic girls. Yukino and Yumiko.
1/11 c15 Guest
interesting chapter
interesting chapter
1/13 c16 kaze no eiyuu
This story is still Alive! I had no idea this was still being updated. Thank you for your hard work, the author.
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This story is still Alive! I had no idea this was still being updated. Thank you for your hard work, the author.
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