for HARRY POTTER : THE POWER ANDS THE GLORY8/12/2020 c11 AlphaWolf246
I really wanted to enjoy this but there are so many grammar and spelling mistakes that I can't. The characters also talk very differently from the movies and books and I'm not sure I like it.
I really wanted to enjoy this but there are so many grammar and spelling mistakes that I can't. The characters also talk very differently from the movies and books and I'm not sure I like it.
5/31/2020 c24 
4David305
Enjoying! But there are so many typos, misspellings, usage issues and other oopses, that it slows the story down.
I urge you to get a competent beta, to help you at least proofread your chapters before posting them. You can't fix errors that you yourself don't know you're making. Four eyes are better than two.
If you click my user-name, you'll get to my bio-page. There, I have a few short essays on why not, why, and how to get a beta; and suggestions for writers.
Keep it up! Cheers,
David
4David305Enjoying! But there are so many typos, misspellings, usage issues and other oopses, that it slows the story down.
I urge you to get a competent beta, to help you at least proofread your chapters before posting them. You can't fix errors that you yourself don't know you're making. Four eyes are better than two.
If you click my user-name, you'll get to my bio-page. There, I have a few short essays on why not, why, and how to get a beta; and suggestions for writers.
Keep it up! Cheers,
David
5/15/2020 c22 Guest
Very good need more.
Very good need more.
4/11/2020 c21 geekymom
Terrific chapter!
I hope you are staying healthy and safe. I look forward to story updates, as I'm disabled and don't get out much.
Terrific chapter!
I hope you are staying healthy and safe. I look forward to story updates, as I'm disabled and don't get out much.
4/10/2020 c20 Wandmaster01
I like your story so far, you need a beta to help with some spelling errors, some of which are consistent and please edit the “s” out of the and in your story title. Looking forward to the next chapter besides the errors above you have a really well developed plot and characters so far.
I like your story so far, you need a beta to help with some spelling errors, some of which are consistent and please edit the “s” out of the and in your story title. Looking forward to the next chapter besides the errors above you have a really well developed plot and characters so far.
3/4/2020 c18 JWOHPfan
Still brilliant! I love the young McGonagall character, a great addition to the story!
Still brilliant! I love the young McGonagall character, a great addition to the story!
2/24/2020 c9 Guest
Mehgan should be around 21-22 years old. At one point you have her telling the Professor she is "Only 18 myself". Just a small error in a really fantastic story
Mehgan should be around 21-22 years old. At one point you have her telling the Professor she is "Only 18 myself". Just a small error in a really fantastic story
2/16/2020 c17 keitaropurple69
I love this story and it is very original, however i was wondering if you were going to add anymore chapters to this story or not?
I love this story and it is very original, however i was wondering if you were going to add anymore chapters to this story or not?
2/15/2020 c17 Katiarange
solid I like where you seem to be leading hope I'm right this is going to be good
solid I like where you seem to be leading hope I'm right this is going to be good