for Manifest Destiny: An Empire of Dirt9/13/2020 c5 navyfield90
I know this is early, but by not removing zorzal and his key members early is illogical and stupid move by the JSDF and thus prolonging the conflict and more unnecessary deaths.
But in doing so you'll have to compensate for the lacks of guerilla warfare by pro war faction and lacks of the second battle of Italica. The movement of haryo tribes also needs to be considered.
I know this is early, but by not removing zorzal and his key members early is illogical and stupid move by the JSDF and thus prolonging the conflict and more unnecessary deaths.
But in doing so you'll have to compensate for the lacks of guerilla warfare by pro war faction and lacks of the second battle of Italica. The movement of haryo tribes also needs to be considered.
9/11/2020 c5 
8NlaEid
Oh damn. Those forshadowings - this story's going to be a moral Roller Coaster isn't it? Well, I'm strapped in and ready to go!
8NlaEidOh damn. Those forshadowings - this story's going to be a moral Roller Coaster isn't it? Well, I'm strapped in and ready to go!
9/11/2020 c5 Guest
If you wish to kill every Japanese then you are a bigot! Yes we always know the fact that Japan's government denies their atrocities in WW2 but don't blame it's people. If you really hate them why don't you try to become a terrorist instead you A$$hole!
Don't get me wrong I love GATE and there's nothing wrong with Americanized version of GATE but you made this thing way too far, so F*CK You Guest!
If you wish to kill every Japanese then you are a bigot! Yes we always know the fact that Japan's government denies their atrocities in WW2 but don't blame it's people. If you really hate them why don't you try to become a terrorist instead you A$$hole!
Don't get me wrong I love GATE and there's nothing wrong with Americanized version of GATE but you made this thing way too far, so F*CK You Guest!
9/11/2020 c1 Guest
Dear Guest so you want to kill all Japanese? Then you are a fucking American Xenophobic bigot you are!
Dear Guest so you want to kill all Japanese? Then you are a fucking American Xenophobic bigot you are!
9/11/2020 c5 1TopHatGuy
Hm yes, can't wait to see Warlord somehow appear in PW, along with every other callsign that appears for a split second. :)
Also you say that the Marines are wearing M81. Uh... why not MARPAT? It'd honestly be even more logistically challenging to scrounge up m81 uniforms for everyone than just use the MARPAT they already have.
I think the main difference between the GATE warcrimes and everyone other warcrimes is that the vast majority of legionnaries intentionally committed warcrimes, while in the Iraq Invasion the Marines didn't try to shoot every single civilian running through the street.
I don't know if the whole orders are orders thing is supposed to be juxtaposed against the warcrimes part, but nice Orders are not a valid defence against warcrimes reference.
Can't wait for the next chapter of Generation Kill: GATE Edition.
But finish PW first.
1TopHatGuyHm yes, can't wait to see Warlord somehow appear in PW, along with every other callsign that appears for a split second. :)
Also you say that the Marines are wearing M81. Uh... why not MARPAT? It'd honestly be even more logistically challenging to scrounge up m81 uniforms for everyone than just use the MARPAT they already have.
I think the main difference between the GATE warcrimes and everyone other warcrimes is that the vast majority of legionnaries intentionally committed warcrimes, while in the Iraq Invasion the Marines didn't try to shoot every single civilian running through the street.
I don't know if the whole orders are orders thing is supposed to be juxtaposed against the warcrimes part, but nice Orders are not a valid defence against warcrimes reference.
Can't wait for the next chapter of Generation Kill: GATE Edition.
But finish PW first.
6/19/2020 c4 Schazmen
Absolutely worth the wait. I love the characterization you give the characters, the logical preparations for the event, and actually spending time with the people involved. While I haven't read the manga, I know the anime didn't spend time on that, and we only got the barest of hints on the main characters before anything happened.
And I like how this isn't gritty and cruel just for the sake of being gritty and cruel "because it's kewl" but it's done realistically.
In short, I have nothing bad to say about this chapter, or even the story, so far.
Absolutely worth the wait. I love the characterization you give the characters, the logical preparations for the event, and actually spending time with the people involved. While I haven't read the manga, I know the anime didn't spend time on that, and we only got the barest of hints on the main characters before anything happened.
And I like how this isn't gritty and cruel just for the sake of being gritty and cruel "because it's kewl" but it's done realistically.
In short, I have nothing bad to say about this chapter, or even the story, so far.
6/17/2020 c4 1TheTrueWrath
Glad to see that Cam hasn't lost his crazy redneck sense of enthusiasm.
This does build to a more private and personal experience of what's about to happen when they pass through the Gate. Honestly I preferred the more grand expanse the first time around, it lets the reader know that this truly is a world class first time event that will forever change the course of human history. The Rangers are just one part of it, but they will play a grand role. Itami too, it seems like he's a bit in the background here.
For now I can only watch and see what happens next!
And trust me brother, you won't get any complaints from me or the other invested readers about late updates. We're all suffering from what's going on in the world right now. I'm behind in my own story as well with constant training and building a foundation for my Army career. I try to write as often as I can just to fill up for the ending I have planned out.
1TheTrueWrathGlad to see that Cam hasn't lost his crazy redneck sense of enthusiasm.
This does build to a more private and personal experience of what's about to happen when they pass through the Gate. Honestly I preferred the more grand expanse the first time around, it lets the reader know that this truly is a world class first time event that will forever change the course of human history. The Rangers are just one part of it, but they will play a grand role. Itami too, it seems like he's a bit in the background here.
For now I can only watch and see what happens next!
And trust me brother, you won't get any complaints from me or the other invested readers about late updates. We're all suffering from what's going on in the world right now. I'm behind in my own story as well with constant training and building a foundation for my Army career. I try to write as often as I can just to fill up for the ending I have planned out.
6/16/2020 c4 8NlaEid
Don't hang out with marines kids, they not only give you exotic STDs, but also language- bad language. And sold out liquor stores. That's important too.
Glad to see this continued, and I love the additional depth given to the characters and their situation. I'm no longer here for GATE, I'm here for D4/75!
8NlaEidDon't hang out with marines kids, they not only give you exotic STDs, but also language- bad language. And sold out liquor stores. That's important too.
Glad to see this continued, and I love the additional depth given to the characters and their situation. I'm no longer here for GATE, I'm here for D4/75!
5/25/2020 c3 Schazmen
Love the action, and how the two Rangers met Itami. Their interactions were good, too!
Love the action, and how the two Rangers met Itami. Their interactions were good, too!
5/25/2020 c2 Schazmen
This gave me chills. Your way with words is excellent, and it brought vivid mental images.
This gave me chills. Your way with words is excellent, and it brought vivid mental images.
5/25/2020 c1 Schazmen
That's a powerful first chapter. Makes me wish I had caught the original story.
That's a powerful first chapter. Makes me wish I had caught the original story.