for Harry Potter's 4th Year and then Release of Dragon's Rage12/14/2024 c1 Guest
well we ask god to forgive us sinners do we not
well we ask god to forgive us sinners do we not
11/16/2024 c1 Guest
You need more periods at the end of some sentences
You need more periods at the end of some sentences
5/14/2024 c1 Loresign
Loved the rank. Too bad you didn’t have the rank with either Dumbledore or Snape.
With what you put down here you really should 2 more one shots like this one, but with the aforementioned people.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Loved the rank. Too bad you didn’t have the rank with either Dumbledore or Snape.
With what you put down here you really should 2 more one shots like this one, but with the aforementioned people.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
8/1/2022 c1 
5KarisTasogare
not bad.
A couple of 'possible issues', but no more than due to 'changes' in JKR's later books.
(ie later info makes earlyer scenes questionable)
5KarisTasogarenot bad.
A couple of 'possible issues', but no more than due to 'changes' in JKR's later books.
(ie later info makes earlyer scenes questionable)
11/12/2021 c1 Brockster550
Minerva needed to he ripped a new one because of her treatment towards Harry. Good to see that she realized the error of her ways and make many changes to prevent Hogwarts from being closed. Great one-shot, keep up the hard work!
Minerva needed to he ripped a new one because of her treatment towards Harry. Good to see that she realized the error of her ways and make many changes to prevent Hogwarts from being closed. Great one-shot, keep up the hard work!
10/8/2020 c1 anifis
yep. this war long overdue. a shame that a boy of 14 years had to point out that doing too much results in doing a piss poor job.
yep. this war long overdue. a shame that a boy of 14 years had to point out that doing too much results in doing a piss poor job.
8/28/2020 c1 Marcus Kyle
Of the use of nuclear weapons in human relationship.
Another title for this very( and true) story.
Of the use of nuclear weapons in human relationship.
Another title for this very( and true) story.
7/4/2020 c1 wolf-master321
I enjoyed it thoroughly I had something similar in mind only it was during the choosing feast where he laid into the entire Great Hall the Headmaster everyone sore magical Vow and just left
I enjoyed it thoroughly I had something similar in mind only it was during the choosing feast where he laid into the entire Great Hall the Headmaster everyone sore magical Vow and just left
5/5/2020 c1 1fhl1234
You did really good for your first attempt at writing. Liked Harry's rant to the Professor. Relieved that nineteen years later changed her perspective and attitude towards Harry. Hope you write something again soon.
1fhl1234You did really good for your first attempt at writing. Liked Harry's rant to the Professor. Relieved that nineteen years later changed her perspective and attitude towards Harry. Hope you write something again soon.
12/29/2019 c1 19x Hemlock x
Those are some really good points about McGonagall. Also, what a great way for Harry to get to have a life free of his status and of Voldemort!
19x Hemlock xThose are some really good points about McGonagall. Also, what a great way for Harry to get to have a life free of his status and of Voldemort!
12/8/2019 c1 Guest
mcgongall is a bitch, plain and simple
mcgongall is a bitch, plain and simple