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12/12/2019 c1 mbzrl
This was really fun to read, thanks for coming up with this and posting it!
12/13/2019 c1 1HexasMancer
Great premise but what a horrible protagonist! That makes it interesting, though!
12/13/2019 c1 13Turrislucidus
With as many favs and follows as you have, I'd expect this to have more reviews—or even one review—so I shall recti—

Get it? You've a lot of energy in this, a good thing, and though Chuck seems only to quote WW, the updates you've made are entertaining. I'd drone on but... This line is wonderful: "His voice sounded the way good chocolate tasted."

You make a good point about what Art is. I used to have a similar thought about test papers: At the beginning of the allotted time, a blank test sheet might be an 'A', but at the end of that time, that same blank page was an assured 'F'.

You also remind me of my favorite bumper-sticker: Illiterate? Write for free brochure. I'll be interested to see how this develops. I certainly dislike Chili at the moment.
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