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2/23 c1 Avid Reader
Nice story. Predictable. Put two people of the opposite sex in a box and they will develop feelings. Biology 101. ESPECIALLY if they spend intimate time w/ close contact on a regular basis together. ESPECIALLY if there is close physical contact. Neurogy 101. But it doesn't take away from your story. But I called it from the moment she moved in and started writing. Although, in reality Bass knew what he was doing. He should have known that ALL that physical intimacy would change things. The only time it does not is when it's an immediate blood relative. Psychology 101. We are hard-wired for this story. It's why co-workers in office settings fall for each other if they spend too much time together.
12/22/2019 c1 5Heather3
Simple and swèet. Great fic.

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