for Go Into the Water12/22/2024 c43 Sumon Banerjee
Update the story please . I want more Aquaman!Percy.
Update the story please . I want more Aquaman!Percy.
11/8/2023 c7 biob1
Hasn't he learned magic or how to manipulate water to push the sub away? Also couldn't he just stealthily physically push the sub away. It honestly feels very contrived and lazy. I'm not trying to flame you by pointing this out I just felt there were much better ways for him to have to leave like him growing as a character and wanting to mend things with annabeth. It would also leave less plot holes because there is no reason for them not to comeback and finish what they started after following him. The ship is advanced enough to find atlantis but not enough to record it's previous position?
Hasn't he learned magic or how to manipulate water to push the sub away? Also couldn't he just stealthily physically push the sub away. It honestly feels very contrived and lazy. I'm not trying to flame you by pointing this out I just felt there were much better ways for him to have to leave like him growing as a character and wanting to mend things with annabeth. It would also leave less plot holes because there is no reason for them not to comeback and finish what they started after following him. The ship is advanced enough to find atlantis but not enough to record it's previous position?
10/31/2023 c42 
1War3houz
I just wanted to say, I loved reading the imperator stories. I really did. They were some of the best pieces of fanfiction I had read in a few years. Then I found this story and it took the cake so fast I literally read it in like 6 hrs. I just hope you come back to this story soon because idk what I'm going to read in the meantime
1War3houzI just wanted to say, I loved reading the imperator stories. I really did. They were some of the best pieces of fanfiction I had read in a few years. Then I found this story and it took the cake so fast I literally read it in like 6 hrs. I just hope you come back to this story soon because idk what I'm going to read in the meantime
3/27/2023 c11 Keres47
I’m hoping beyond hope that you didn’t just make Jason Superman. He and Percy have always been on near equal fighting terms so making him damn near invincible would pretty much butcher that dynamic.
I’m hoping beyond hope that you didn’t just make Jason Superman. He and Percy have always been on near equal fighting terms so making him damn near invincible would pretty much butcher that dynamic.
3/27/2023 c9 Keres47
I’m confused, didn’t Triton and Chiron just have a conversation about not having more Atlanteans show up. To make people think he was the only one? Why right after that talk is Artemis joining him?
I’m confused, didn’t Triton and Chiron just have a conversation about not having more Atlanteans show up. To make people think he was the only one? Why right after that talk is Artemis joining him?
3/27/2023 c6 Keres47
I wish instead of just changing names the author came up with new ideas. For example just making Zeus the same subspecies of human as Poseidon doesn’t make much sense. I mean you introduced Jason with his ability to fly so it would make far more sense to have him as a subspecies that lived on rose to the peaks of mountains or even lived on top of floating islands hidden by magic. Weaker physically than Atlanteans due to evolving in different conditions but allowing them other abilities such as flight or even aerokenisis. For Hades kin you could’ve made them a subspecies that evolved in caves and mountain crevices. And of course all these powers can come from the three symbols of power. The Trident is already in it so the others wouldn’t cause a problem except for adding more variables. And I semi dislike the throwing away of actual Greek mythology, if you plan on using the amazons or the gods now you’ll have to write around them. Cause now Perseus was not the son of a god. Just the brother of a king. Negating all of the stories and the Happy ending Sally named him for. Now if you wanted to combine Perseus with Atlantis then you could’ve just said that he was a friend and honored guest of the Atlanteans during his time on Earth. So in conclusion I dislike that you’ve made Zeus, the king of the skies and gods. A mere extension of Poseidons domain
I wish instead of just changing names the author came up with new ideas. For example just making Zeus the same subspecies of human as Poseidon doesn’t make much sense. I mean you introduced Jason with his ability to fly so it would make far more sense to have him as a subspecies that lived on rose to the peaks of mountains or even lived on top of floating islands hidden by magic. Weaker physically than Atlanteans due to evolving in different conditions but allowing them other abilities such as flight or even aerokenisis. For Hades kin you could’ve made them a subspecies that evolved in caves and mountain crevices. And of course all these powers can come from the three symbols of power. The Trident is already in it so the others wouldn’t cause a problem except for adding more variables. And I semi dislike the throwing away of actual Greek mythology, if you plan on using the amazons or the gods now you’ll have to write around them. Cause now Perseus was not the son of a god. Just the brother of a king. Negating all of the stories and the Happy ending Sally named him for. Now if you wanted to combine Perseus with Atlantis then you could’ve just said that he was a friend and honored guest of the Atlanteans during his time on Earth. So in conclusion I dislike that you’ve made Zeus, the king of the skies and gods. A mere extension of Poseidons domain
2/15/2023 c43 HellsRanger59
This is a damn good story I hope that you will come back and finish it. I really like the way that you have moved the people around in their love lives, personal life's and friendships. You made this a must read story for Persey fans. Please come back and finish it. Also I want to Thank You for taking time out of your life to write this story. Keep up the good work.
Thank You,
HellsRanger59
This is a damn good story I hope that you will come back and finish it. I really like the way that you have moved the people around in their love lives, personal life's and friendships. You made this a must read story for Persey fans. Please come back and finish it. Also I want to Thank You for taking time out of your life to write this story. Keep up the good work.
Thank You,
HellsRanger59
1/18/2023 c1 Fabery
As soon as I read ATLANTIS I thought about Arthur Curry. Your end note made me realize I was not imagining things.
As soon as I read ATLANTIS I thought about Arthur Curry. Your end note made me realize I was not imagining things.
12/1/2022 c42 12mastercheif1229
Incredible story so far! I REALLY hope that you continue it sometime soon!
12mastercheif1229Incredible story so far! I REALLY hope that you continue it sometime soon!